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Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2010 - 01:50 am Title: Welcome To Sunnydale

enjoyed

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: RKM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2010 - 02:56 am Title: Welcome To Sunnydale

enjoying it so far - liking that while the spell broke, buffy didn't resume her hatred of him (and apparently it didn't for spike, either ...) looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2009 - 10:55 am Title: Welcome To Sunnydale

I love the premise of this fic, but as others have already pointed out I'm finding the narrative very sketchy, I feel you haven't gone into nearly enough detail. i'm also upset with Buffy for staying away for so long. Who has been doing the slaying? Who has dealt with Adam & Glory?
I'll keep reading to find out what's going on, and to see Spike's reaction when he sees Katie-Beth.
Oh, just a technical point - it looks as if you chose to express Buffy's thoughts in pointy brackets. The compuer sees these as HTML tags and as the tags aren't true HTML the thoughts are all missing. I think we really need to follow her thoughts as a means to find out what's going on so I suggest you try using italics or bold, or curly brackets instead.

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice about the HTML. I was posting late at night and I was just a tad sleepy as I'd had an exam resit earlier in the day and just missed that mistake. This story went AU after Something Blue, so Adam hadn't been mentioned then and as Dawn is just a normal human who had lived in LA up to this point, there was no need for Glory, But, please note, I have explainedsome of this later on and will do in future chapters that I write.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2009 - 11:43 am Title: Welcome To Sunnydale

Buffy was gone for five years? That's five years she stole her baby girl the father's baby = time that Spike had could have spend with the daughter he never knew now. Not sure how I would take this secret if it was my daughter. That's very long especially for when a child is young.

And it sounds as if Buffy doesn't work as a slayer any longer? So what did she do instead.

Author's Response: I know that five years is a long time, as many other reviewers have commented on this. I do address this slightly in chapters I have already written, but it also gives me an idea for future chapters. As for what Buffy done other than slaying, she was busy raising Katie-Beth and becoming an artist.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2009 - 05:33 am Title: Welcome To Sunnydale

okay, i'm confused, not sure how i feel about this fiction yet, but i wasn't expecting for it to be five years later. i'm disappointed in buffy, i get that she wants to keep her daughter safe, but i don't understand why she would have been away for that long, not even telling anyone where she was. and if spike is somewhat of a friend here, at least he seems like it, looking after her mom and all, how could buffy not even tell him that he's the father? so, yeah, i'm a little disappointed so far. she doesn't seem like she wants him in her life or her daughter's, i may give one more chapter a chance, but it's too soon to tell if i'll continue to read this.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I will certainly think about the issues you've raised and possibly address then in future chapters.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2009 - 05:04 am Title: Welcome To Sunnydale

Looking forward to Spike and Buffy's meeting, and introducing Katie-Beth to Spike. I love the little hints you've put in the chapter, like Buffy's art Warm Blue Eyes. I wonder if she'll draw or paint or make something that Spike will see?

Thank you for updating so quickly.

Author's Response: Thanks, I think I mention the artwork later on, but I'm not sure. If I haven't it will deffinately come up in a future chapter I haven't written yet.

Reviewer: v4viper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2009 - 03:18 am Title: Welcome To Sunnydale

Woohoo cant wait for the great meeting

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I know this fic is a little sketchy, so I don't mind if you tell me where you think I need to make some changes.

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