Date: 09/14/2009 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 4 & Chapter 5
I liked the update; all in all it went well. Now I'm looking forward to Giles' answer.
Author's Response: Yeah, busy working on it, but my main interest is finishing my next chapter of older. Hopefully I will have it posted for this weekend.
Date: 09/14/2009 - 11:31 am Title: Chapter 4 & Chapter 5
Well done, the story is reading much better now you're filling in the details a bit more and including some conversation. So... now's the time to reveal that Angel & Cordy are living at the mansion and that Angel is Connor's father? Right?
Author's Response: That's right. Might not be the next chapter I post but within the next few chapters definately.
Date: 09/13/2009 - 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 4 & Chapter 5
It's good that Buffy will be moving back to Sunnydale. More please!
Author's Response: Yeah, things are looking up for Buffy, Spike and Katie-Beth.
Date: 09/13/2009 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 4 & Chapter 5
Hello. i like the story, so please keep writing and update as soon as you can. Sorry if I don't write more, but I don't know what to say, just that I hope for a happy end. Bye.
Author's Response: As I've said, I will try to update soon, but I have writer's block on both my fics and I'm starting my 2nd year at uni on the 21st so, RL is going to be hectic.