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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2012 - 07:32 am Title: Epilogue

I have some very mixed feelings about this story. I am a total grammar/spelling/grammar nerd, and I mostly read prcisely, exactly what is on the page/screen. This is fine, unless there are a lot of errors, then the sentences or paragraphs are hard for me to understand and I have to do a lot of re-reading to figure out what the author really meant. This story has a bunch of typos, grammar problems, syntax issues, spelling errors, verb tense & agreement mistakes and vocab problems (a lot of instances of a similar-sounding but incorrect word being used)... I was confused a lot but I think I mostly eventually figured out what was meant... but it wasn't easy!

That said, I really liked the characters, I liked the premise, and I really, really love the theme/moral. Even given the explanations, I do agree with others' criticism of Buffy's break-up... I did see some of the hints along the way, but the foreshadowing/set-up still wasn't enough. The fact that so many readers had trouble swallowing it supports that; it's not just that we disagreed with Buffy or thought she was being an idiot (that's fine, as most of us felt that way about her on the show, but we understood the character's flaws enough to believe her actions), it's that we couldn't believe that the character would have done that at that point. As readers, we just weren't prepared for that decision.

This story has the potential to be a really great story (it's clear a lot of work and thought was invested in it), it just needs a really thorough editing to clean up the mechanics and tighten up some of the writing.

Reviewer: tobehislove Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2011 - 11:01 pm Title: Epilogue

Thank you

Author's Response: No, thank you for leaving a reviewing. Big hugs, tobehislove!

Reviewer: E Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2011 - 10:09 pm Title: Epilogue

Loved it!

Author's Response: thanks E! It's nice to see reviews for old stories. You've made my day! thanks!

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2011 - 03:49 am Title: Epilogue

very, very good story. while i didn't enjoy the anguish the characters had to go through, they needed to go through it to get to the rainbow. and that i can appreciate and respect.

enjoyed the friendship between the main and secondary characters, and i had quite a giggle a time or two.

thank you for sharing your talent and this story. it was a great story-ride!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, rkm! I'm always still amazed when I see reviews for stories I've finished so long ago. I know the anguish was hard to read, but like you said it made the characters grow and it was needed for them to reach the end. Big thanks again!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 - 03:04 am Title: Epilogue

I loved this story!

Author's Response: Thanks Anna! There is a sequel, a one shot called santa baby! Go read, very spuffy!

Reviewer: Elena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2009 - 03:53 pm Title: Epilogue

Loved it. Thank you thank you thank you for sharing. Please write more.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed this story. I loved writing it, especially the interactions between Clem and Spike.

Reviewer: schnulli Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2009 - 07:18 pm Title: Epilogue

Great story and beautiful ending!!!



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed

Reviewer: laemda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 - 06:59 pm Title: Epilogue

Great story and beautiful ending!!!

Author's Response: thank you so much for enjoying my story! and thank you for the review

Reviewer: PJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 - 01:37 pm Title: Epilogue

I really enjoyed this story and it was lovely to see a happy ending.

Author's Response: Thanks.....happy endings are needed in our busy lives to help make the day tolerable

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 - 09:07 am Title: Epilogue

So sad this story has come to an end! It flowed so easily from start to end that it doesn't feel like 32 chapters have passed by already. Can I beg for one little epilogue? It would be great to see what these two are doing in a few more years. So happy that you had it end with a wedding though, so often authors chose to skip it, but it's nice to them reach that stage. Can't wait to see what story comes next, you are a WONDERFUL writer. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you for enjoying. I tried really hard to make it flow and I'm glad that you believed that it did. At times it wasnt' so easy to do. And a BIG thanks for enjoying my writing. Sometimes I question myself if I'm making sense. Your and others reviews really help. Thank you again

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 - 08:22 am Title: Epilogue

I enjoyed your story and especially liked how Buffy recognized her mistakes with Spike and grew with love. Your footnotes were always informative. Thank you for the happy ending.

Author's Response: Your welcome. I appreciate your reading and reviewing. Like I said in the story the journey is the steps that it takes you to get there that's the most important

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 - 06:13 am Title: Epilogue

So glad they got their happy ending. Thanks for the ride.


Author's Response: Your welcome. Thanks for jumping on my crazy train!!!

Reviewer: JennO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 - 04:25 am Title: Epilogue

This was quite frankly one of the best stories I've read on this site. Thank you for writing and sharing it!

Author's Response: *blush* You humble me with your comment. thank you so much for it

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 - 04:16 am Title: Epilogue

a beautiful ending to a beautiful story-- thank you so much for sharing it!

Author's Response: I appreciate that you enjoyed

Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 - 12:32 am Title: Epilogue

Thank you for sharing this story. Every week, I anxiously waited for a new chapter of Legal Debriefing. I'm a bit sad to see that the story has ended, but I love the happy ending you gave the couple.

Author's Response: I appreciate that you looked forward to my story. Well like all good things, they must come to an end. But thank you so much for enjoying my story

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 - 11:28 pm Title: Epilogue

I think it must be complicated (difficult or at last a lot of work) to go from one legal system to another. Because he is already working with the U.S. one it's easier for them to work in USA I guess.
The song was beautiful, expressed well Spike's thoughts.
Good to see that they are so happy now. :D

Author's Response: Yeah I love that song. Thank you for your continuous reviews they really helped my inner muse

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 - 11:16 pm Title: Epilogue

Awesome fic! Loved it!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you loved it! I appreciate your constant reviews it helped a lot

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 - 10:34 pm Title: Epilogue

Yea... enjoyed

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you did

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