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Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2010 - 06:50 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Excellent! The banter in the fairy tale and Spike singing! Oh, you know I love Spike singing!! And Anya was PRICELESS!! You did her perfectly (And I should know! LOL!).

-Passion4Spike
2010.04.11

Author's Response: I just love having Spike sing too :P Glad you liked the extra banter-iness and Anya :D I really had fun writing Anya so far in this fic. I hadn't used her very much in my earlier stories, so I thought I'd give her some moments to shine lol

Thanks for the sweet review, P4S! *huggz & smooches*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2009 - 11:46 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Boy, I'm thinking I know why the Inari didn't want Riley through that porthole. Not a very nice guy this time around. Hope that Buffy and Spike can hang in there and pull through.

Author's Response: Maybe the Unari did see that Riley would get flaky lol Or maybe they just had good taste, as Spike surmised ;) Riley's an a*hole heehee

Buffy and Spike are both very strong-willed people, they're hanging tough :)

Thanks for reviewing, BuffyRat! *smoochies*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2009 - 05:59 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

heehee, or maybe the thought of being in Spike's personal space is what is giving him a hard-on lol.

I don't like Wicked Willow. She is being mean to Spike and Buffy. I hope they kill her in a very painful way in the next chapter.

Love this so far, now off to next chapter!

*smooochieesss*

Author's Response: Hey, Chan! *hugs* Lol and Eww about Riley being secretly hot for Spike! Although... it is an interesting idea :P

Yep, Wicked Willow is nasty and sure does need a killin'. Wait 'n see how (and if!) they can get 'er done heehee

Thanks for the review, Chan! *hugs & smoochies*

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2009 - 01:04 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

ARGHHHH! I'd have thought they'd have been free by now! They're really fed up - or not - if you get my drift - they'll be getting too weak to do anything! I love this - looking forward to the next chapter...Snogs face off Pagan!! SNOG SNOG SNOG!!! Teehee!! XXXXXXX

Author's Response: Their prison experience is going to last several chapters longer - I hope you'll bear with me lol I don't want it to get boring, but the story wanted to be told a certain way :) Fed up - heehee - nice one :P

Thanks for the review, Andy! *snog snog snog* heehee :D

Reviewer: Deb (LoobyLoo) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2009 - 12:59 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Oh dear! Oh dear oh dear oh dear! Buffy and spike are in a pickle aren't they! Anf getting weaker all the time too...not that the evil witch will believe them either. Here's hoping they come up with a plan soon to get free! - Oh dear!!
Smoochies and hugs XXXX

Author's Response: Hi Deb! *smooches* Yep, our heroes are in big trouble. But they're pretty tough, and getting along better. If anyone stands a chance it's them :) Riley would be toast if he was the one who went through the portal with Buffy heehee

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Deb! *smoochies & lurve*

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2009 - 01:39 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

I'm really enjoying this story. I love how you've moulded the fairy tale (can't wait to see what other ones you use). And Spike in laderhosen makes me giggle- if there's one person in the world that could look hot in them, it's him.
Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks, Niori! I'm happy that you're digging the story :D I'm having a good time writing it too. I've got some fun and interesting fairy tales planned for future Parts. I wish I had a clone to help me write so I could get to them faster! lol

Oh yeah, you gotta love Spike in lederhosen heehee He would definitely look hot lol You got that right :P

Thank you for the review, I loved reading it! *smoooches*

Reviewer: cal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2009 - 03:16 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

The evil witch needs to be put down. Spike and Buffy are having a hard time thinking of a way out of there. At least they are working together now. They need to if they want to get past look alike Willow. Spike is being all sweet to Buffy. Offering her his food. Singing to her when he knew she had trouble falling asleep. Only if Spike can sing me to sleep. I would like that very much.
I'm really enjoying this story so much. Not that I'm surprise since the writer is very talented. I want to know how Spike and Buffy manages to escape. So get with the writing, Pagan. Do I need to take out my whip?I hope that you are doing well. That life is good for you right now. Sending you lots of hugs, take care sweetie.

Author's Response: Hey, cal! *hugs* Aww you're so sweet :D I'm glad you're enjoying! Mmhmm Spike is being a sweetiepie. I'd love a bedtime serenade by Spike too heehee Buffy and Spike will be tested to their limits - good thing they're such tough people!

The next chapter will be up today. I got you crackin that whip in my mind lol I'm making some good progress too! lol

Thanks for reviewing, cal! *sending lots o' hugs & smoochies right back at ya* :D


Author's Response: Hey, cal! *hugs* Aww you're so sweet :D I'm glad you're enjoying! Mmhmm Spike is being a sweetiepie. I'd love a bedtime serenade by Spike too heehee Buffy and Spike will be tested to their limits - good thing they're such tough people!

The next chapter will be up today. I got you crackin that whip in my mind lol I'm making some good progress too! lol

Thanks for reviewing, cal! *sending lots o' hugs & smoochies right back at ya* :D

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 - 10:57 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Aww, Spike singing so Buffy would relax was sweet. Still wondering how they're going to get away from the witch, though.

The thought of killing Spike was so pleasurable, it was actually giving him a hard-on.

Ew, Riley's gross. And Anya's babblings about comparing Spike and Riley were very funny :D

Great chapter!

Author's Response: I loved the singing part too. So nice to imagine it :) Spike and Buffy have some tough times ahead of them.

I'm sorry 'bout Riley having a boner lol I hope you weren't too traumatized *hugs* It's always fun to write Anya dialogue, especially when it's about how hot Spike is :P heehee

Thanks for reading and reviewing, xaph! *hugggles and smooches*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 - 11:07 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Great chappie PB. It's good that they're finally gonna work together...it's about time. Buffy better get over not wanting to kill Witchipoo cause she looks like Willow. That's just dumb. Can you please have her die a painful, horrible death? HATE her so much. My fave part was Spike singing to Buffy. Awww, that was so sweet. They are both realizing they care for each other, even if they won't admit it out loud. heehee. I liked how you alluded to Spike's trigger in S7 when he was thinking about the song his mom sang to him. Poor Spike. I don't know how people can say Spike couldn't love after watching that epi. It was so obvious he loved his mom even after her was turned, unlike Angelus. Stupid Spike haters.

Now the Scoobies can see what's going on too. I'm guessing they'll have a show soon , Hopefully Riley will be there when S/B get with the Spuffy Smut. LOL. Pleas,pleas have Anya talk about Spike's package in front of Riley. so his little penis can shrink even more. LOL.
It's a good thing I lurve ya PB, cause that last line about Riley's hard-on has traumatized me for the rest of the night. * goes lookin for steel wool to erase that image from my brain* I wonder if the writers or Joss actually thought that the audience thought Riley was sexy or hot? Yeah...they are kinda dumb sometimes so they probably did. That's why we got almost 2 seasons of the idiot. Can you tell I really despise Riley? Stupid Spike hating jerk.

Anywho, I loved it as usual can't wait for more!!!* hugs & smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! =D I'm glad you liked the singin' Spike part heehee I just get all mushy thinking about it :P They are realizing that they care more about each other than they'd imagined. And (if it goes well) they'll get closer to admitting it to each other :P

hehehehe Riley and his tiny weiner, so sad :D After I read your review, I decided to insert a Magic Box scene in the next chapter - you'll like it, methinks ;) Oh, I am so regretting having that line about Riley at the end of the chapter lol I'm so sorry *hugs, and strokes your hair soothingly* Speaking of hard-ons (lol) Marti Noxon had a huge one for Riley, thus why we were subjected to the git. We're united in our hating of Riley, and our lurve of Spike heehee

Thanks for the awesome review, sweetie! *smoochies and lurve*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 - 06:03 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Good to see an update :)
If Buffy can't eat they have to hurry to think of a plan that will function too. And this witch is really strong.
Crab-shells? A human can't eat that. The witch is crazy, given Spike human food and Buffy non of it (I think that are only shells or?).
So sweet when Spike sung to Buffy.
The Scoobies think Buffy and Spike are save? If they only knew...
~ I really hope they manage to trick that witch soon.

Author's Response: Sorry it took so long to update, ck. My beta was moving and it took her longer than expected.

There might be a little crab meat left in the shells that Buffy can scrape out - still gross though lol Mmhmm, I loved the thought of Spike singing to make Buffy feel better *dreamy sigh* The Scoobies won't know what's going on with Spike and Buffy for a while yet, but I expect they'll be appropriately horrified - especially poor Willow :(

Thank you for reviewing, ck! *snogs* :D

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 - 03:37 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Oh my, whenever ,and however will they escape the witches evil clutches.

Author's Response: Their chances don't look too good at the moment. But never give up on the power of Spuffy lol There's not much they can't do when they're united - they need to work on the uniting thing ;)

Thanks for the review, sanityfair! :D *smoochies*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 - 12:11 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

"Holy Oktoberfest!"

Anya whistled. "Check out the unit on him; he's really packed into those shorts. I wouldn't mind blowing his Alpine horn..." LMAO! Ricooooooolaaaa!

Poor Buffy and her crabshells *giggles* I love the relationship exploration within this chapter. Its sweet to see them in a tough situation.

Now the evil Willow!Witch, *bitchflicks her* They better figure out how to escape.. and soon. I am so worried about them both.

Riley is so disgusting wiff his hard on. *vomits on him* wait. He might cum with that. nevermind. *giggles*

can't wait for next update to this oh so fab fairy tale *hugs and twirls*

and still loving that banner!

Author's Response: hehehe *hugs and twirls* I'm sooo happy that you're pleased with the story! =D

Author's Response: Wtf...? TSR ate most of my response *flicks it* Okay here's the rest of what I wanted to say:

I'm glad that you're loving the funny as well as them getting more comfy wiff each other :P Mmm, crab-shells heehee

Oh I'm sorry 'bout the Riley boner line lol Bad note to end a chapter on, now that I think about it! I'll try to update soon to get that image out of your head heehee

Thanks for reviewing, Kitten! *slobbers on you* :P


Author's Response: Wtf...? TSR ate most of my response *flicks it* Okay here's the rest of what I wanted to say:

I'm glad that you're loving the funny as well as them getting more comfy wiff each other :P Mmm, crab-shells heehee

Oh I'm sorry 'bout the Riley boner line lol Bad note to end a chapter on, now that I think about it! I'll try to update soon to get that image out of your head heehee

Thanks for reviewing, Kitten! *slobbers on you* :P

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