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Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2010 - 09:50 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Funny, scary, even a little nice from Buffy . . . And Riley's cracking up! Loved it!! Anya was like a Mastercard commercial - PRICELESS!

-Passion4Spike
2010.04.11

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Anya ain't afraid to say what's on her mind, she won't be silenced lol Yep, Riley's losin' his shit already heehee I really, really hate him - as if you couldn't tell :P

Thanks for the review! I loves 'em :D *huggs*

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2009 - 01:14 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Love it that they're getting along better now and Buffy trusts Spike some. But how will they get away from the evil witch? Can't wait for more, so off to next chapter!!!

Author's Response: :) Glad you liked it, Deb! Mmhmm they're learning to get along and liking each other a bit more, that's of the good :D But they're still in the witch's clutches - they gotta work on that lol

Thanks for reading & reviewing, Deb! *smoochies & lurve*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 12:20 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Hee, great chapter. Still can't work out how they're going to get away from the witch, hope they figure it out soon.

Author's Response: :D Thanks, Xaph! Spike and Buffy will keep on trying to find a way to escape. They missed something (which they'll figure out later and say "D'oh!" lol) but they'll have another chance :)

Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! *hugggles and smoochies*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2009 - 04:31 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Love the growing trust between Buffy and Spike. And the growing instability of Riley. Hope they best that witch soon. She's a pretty big drag.

Author's Response: Thank you for getting that it's about Spike and Buffy learning to trust and seeing that they care about each other *hugs & squishes* I hope you'll stick with the story as I explore more of those Spuffy feelings rising to the surface :P And Riley losing his shit is fun to write heehee

Thanks for reviewing, BuffyRat! *smoochies*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2009 - 06:41 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

lol the thought of seeing Riley's penis actually made me cringe. I was definitely not wanting to read that, lol.

Stupid Wicked Willow, with the invisible forcefield around her and her property. She's the one with every centimeter in her body being evil. I really hope she dies bloody.

I was thinking that the sun wasn't going to affect Spike in this dimension and she would punish him for being a liar. Good thing (sorta) that it worked. I don't want to see Spike get hurt anymore. Maybe she will come back with some animal blood for Spike to get all flubbery on. I don't know why she wants him all fat lol wouldn't she rather the meat than the fat? Meh, maybe she is just disgusting like that lol.

Can't wait for more! Update soon.

*hugs and lurve*

Author's Response: lol I subjected you guys to having to read about Riley sporting a stiffy before, so I couldn't, in good conscience, have him do the Full Monty. There *will* be some Spike stiffys in the future as a way of me making amends to y'all :P heehee

lol I know what you mean about the witch wanting Spike to get fat. Seems like she'd be happier with lean meat *shrugs* lol Buffy and Spike did miss an opportunity to get away, they won't figure it out until later.

I'm glad you're enjoying the ride, Chan :) The main thing I want to accomplish by having this scenario last so long is Buffy and Spike realizing that their feelings for each other go much deeper than they thought possible :)

Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! *hugs & lurve*

Reviewer: cal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2009 - 12:56 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

I'm wondering how Spike and Buffy are going to get out of this mess. Spike is getting weaker by the day from not having any blood and with his messed up hand. Buffy isn't really eating that much and doing a lot of physical work so she must be feeling weaker too. If they don't get out soon then I'm afraid they are going to be too weak to do anything. I love that Spike didn't take any of Buffy's blood. He is proving to Buffy that he cares and that she can trust him. I felt bad for Spike when the evil witch put Spike's hand in the sun. Then she wanted to take a bite of his hand. Gross much. I do hope that Spike and Buffy think of something soon to get out of there. I got a good laugh at Anya going on about how big Spike's package is and how small Riley must be. Riley getting mad to the point where he was going to whip it out. Too funny. I love Anya at least she can openly admit that Spike is hot. I think Giles is right. I think Riley is cracking up.
Thanks for another wonderful chapter, PB. You never disappoint me. I did have to read this chapter twice because the first time I read it I was just too tired. But I need more please. Please Pagan. hugs and kisses

Author's Response: *hugs Cal* I'm happy you're still digging the story :D

Spike and Buffy missed a chance or two to get away, which they won't find out about until later. They're going to start feeling pretty hopeless, but those two aren't the types that give up :)

heehee Anya made Riley snap - he stopped before he made a total fool out of himself though (and prove her theory correct) lol

Love ya, Cal! Thanks for reviewing *smooochies & lurve*

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 - 09:37 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

*snicker* I love Anya. That was epic. It had me laughing out loud.
Damn! I was hoping the axe would work. The wtich is seriously starting to irritate me- I hope Buffy and Spike off her soon.
Anyway, can't wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response: heehee I love Anya too! Glad I gave you a chuckle :D

That was mean of me - to have the axe attack not work *hides* But I've got lots more Spike and Buffy getting closer moments ahead, and had to have them stay put a while longer lol

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Niori! *smooches*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 - 08:01 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Oh boy PB it's getting really bad for our duo. I don't see how they can get out of this. I liked Spike refusing to drink from Buffy when Witchiepoo ordered him to. She knows she can trust him now. And they're still bitching at each other. :( They gotta stop and concentrate on a plan.

Loved the scene at the Magic Box.
Anya is so funny, I love her. --> She'd never pass up a chance to see a penis. LMAO

You shoulda had No dick drop his pants(even tho the thought is horrifying *shudders*) just to prove how inadequate he really is and so we could all have a good laff at his expense. LOL And Buffy not thinking about Riley at all really says alot. Think Buffy,for God's sake.

LOVED it Pagan, can't wait to see what you come up with for the next update. :)





Author's Response: Glad you're still enjoying, AMI! Some people are tired of the way I'm writing the story. So it's wonderful to know you're still into it :D

Buffy and Spike will be getting along better in the next chapter :) Yay for them lol

It was fun writing that Magic Box scene with Anya heehee I considered letting Riley whip it out, but I just couldn't *shudders* lol

Thanks for the awesome review, AMI! It made me smile =D After getting some less than stellar review, I really needed one like yours *hugs & smoochies*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 - 02:13 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Buffy doesn't get treated well.... Too bad there's another spell now. It doesn't seem likely for them to get away.
Ah then there is an oven there.
That Riley slipped Buffy's mind, she really should think about this fact. *g*
I hoped that Spike could wander in the world without being hurt; but it seems the sunlight can hurt him there too.
Till next time! Looking forward to read more. Not a good place where Buffy and Spike are now.

Author's Response: heehee I enjoyed writing that convo where Buffy forgot about Riley :P Cos, puh-leese, no way can Riley measure up to Angel - or Spike, of course ;)

Yeah, things look pretty bad for Buffy and Spike at the mo'. It'll get worse before it gets better. I hope you'll bear with me *hugs* :)

Thanks for reading & reviewing, ck! *smoochies & hugs*


Author's Response: heehee I enjoyed writing that convo where Buffy forgot about Riley :P Cos, puh-leese, no way can Riley measure up to Angel - or Spike, of course ;)

Yeah, things look pretty bad for Buffy and Spike at the mo'. It'll get worse before it gets better. I hope you'll bear with me *hugs* :)

Thanks for reading & reviewing, ck! *smoochies & hugs*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 - 10:04 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Let me start with Anya never passing up the chance to see a penis! LMAO =))

Riley... I just want to smack him. You do a great Riley/ Oh wait. That sounded terrible, but yo know what I mean.

Spike is too sweet. Refusing to feed from Buffy even knowing all is going down hill. Wonder how long he will really be able to hold out.

Buffy took a chance at that witch, but it didnt pay off. Damnit. I hope they figure out something soon :( I am so worried about both of them.

Love Spike singing and his song choices are awesome. They fit so perfect.

Giles' line about Riley made me laugh. Yes, please find him some busy work! hahahaha

Well done, PB! Just another notch in your belt for this amazing piece of fanfic! You are so rockin the fairy tales! *smooooooch*

Author's Response: *tackles and hugs* I do so love your reviews :D

Riley sucks lol I'm using this situation to bring out the pettiness and ugliness you just know was inside him. *flicks him*

Glad you like Spike's songs too :D I just love the thought of him singing for Buffy. And Spike refusing to take Buffy's blood is a big turning point in their relationship ;)

Thanks for the awesome review, Kitten! *smoochies and mucho love*

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