Date: 01/16/2010 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter 7
This story is a fun romp! I'm enjoying your Spuffy take on these episodes and you've deftly re-imagined things so far. I'm looking forward to more.
Date: 01/15/2010 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
this feels a bit too rushed to me, like it's all happening too fast. i don't like that buffy is still keeping spike a secret, she could have had a date for the homecoming dance, but of course she still cares about what her friends think. i suppose you're waiting for revelations for the truth to come out, at least not having faith involved, xander can't go to her to stake spike.
Date: 01/15/2010 - 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
Your answer to the last chapter: Nope, not hard to follow. But it's been so long that I saw the episodes that I've forgotten how people looked like Pete or Debbie looked like.
At last this time homecoming didn't give Buffy trouble. And going out with Spike? Another plus. :)