[Report This]Date: 02/07/2010 - 10:41 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Enjoyed this fic, thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2010 - 08:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Intense with nail-biting moments. Glad that they are together in the end and that Angelus and Drusilla are no longer around to bother them.
Author's Response: Thanks! I enjoyed dusting both Angelus and Drusilla! It was a major pleasure...especially Angelus!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2010 - 05:40 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I have just finished your story and I am very pleased that you took the time to finish it. So many authors just abandon a story for what ever reason and then you are left stranded in the middle forever. But I was very pleased with the oringinal plot and the intense feelings of the plot. So thank You again for your lovely storytelling that has entertained me .
Cindy
Author's Response: Thank you Cindy. I hate not finishing stories, my muse gets bitchy. Yes, I know I do have one story called Wanting that has been sitting unfinished for a long while. I am planning to go back to it. Pull it down and do a major overhaul...I transgress. Back to BTB...I am pleased that you enjoyed the plot and the intense feelings that I try to portray with my writing. Hope to hear from you again soon. Thank you again.
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2010 - 05:18 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
just a follow up - please dont take that the wrong way. i totally loved this story even with the darker places it went to. i love your writing and how you delve into the hearts of these characters. the ending to this esp with buffy defining herself was so beautiful. although i was a fan of the show I never really liked buffy's character. *ducts* i know. dont hate me but its true. but your portrayal brought out the best in her i think and i always felt/feel a great joy when i see an update with your name. although i cant write myself, god knows ive tried, im so grateful for those of you that can. so please continue. dont give up. there will be many sad if you do. thank you
Author's Response: *Major squee* I'm completely flattered that you look forward to my stories. Sometimes its hard to keep going when reviews are few and far between. I know...I know I should write for the pleasure of it. But since I'm a relative newbie to writing, I need reassurance sometimes. Reviews like your and others really make me happy! Snoopy Dance happy!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2010 - 05:07 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
aw thanks for the very lovely conclusion. i love happy endings for this couple!! too bad anglelus couldnt know more pain before his death. i was quite enjoyably imagining some visions of buffy vamp teeth ripping off his *ehem* as he tried to shove it down her throat. aw well at least our favorite couple got an ending together. thanks for this wild ride and im looking forward to the next one!!
Author's Response: Yeah, having a taste of his *ehem* would of been justice for Angelus. I just enjoyed having Buffy tearing his heart out! Of course our fav couple is going to have a happy ending, just took a little while to get there!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2010 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Thank you for your story and the great ending. I am so glad that Buffy did not become a full vampire. I really like how it all came down to Buffy and who she is. I am sorry that you did not think people liked your story because of the number of reviews received. I just wanted you to know that I have enjoyed all of your stories and I think you are a great writer. Please continue writing and posting.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story. Throughout most of the episodes, until Season 7, Buffy never truly knew who she was. It makes sense...none of us do at that...or sometimes any age! We all have doubts where we fit in, in this crazy thing called life. And thank you tremendously that you enjoy my writing and stories. I know I should write because I enjoy it, but sometimes that inner teenager comes out, and I need reassurance. Overall I feel that I'm a strong, independent woman...but since writing is new to me, I sometimes feel awkward and just plain wrong. Well...enough psychoanalyzing myself. Again...many thanks!!! Big Hugs!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2010 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter Twenty
can we skip to the happy ending now please.
jk but i do hope that buffy and spike can work past this. and now angelus must really die. a slow painful death.
Author's Response: One happy ending...coming up!
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2010 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Unexpected to see the other give Spike blood. But very needed.
Didn't think Dru would come to Buffy's rescue. Well it was more like revenge on Angelus. She did what she could.
But oh my, that's very bad - Angel took Buffy's life. Not fair.
I fear she'll be a full vampire now, maybe a minion if she didn't get enough blood. Hope Angelus will end as dust soon for what he did.
*sigh*
Author's Response: Don't worry...Angelus will get his!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2010 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I hope this does not mean that Buffy is fully a vampire now. I liked that Buffy was still human with vampire traits. I don't know if I will like it if Buffy becomes a full vampire. I think that the uniqueness of this story is that Buffy accepted her vampire traits while still being human and a slayer. Also, Spike liked her the way she is. I will patiently wait to read what your muse perceives to be a happy ending. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review and stating your wishes. My muse loves all imput! Another update will be coming soon
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2010 - 01:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
You never disappoint me, I love all your stories, and I think you are a great author, whom I have read repeatedly, and whose stories I reread often.
Don´t misunderstand, please. It´s not my intention to have fluff out there only or to tell any author what he has to do or not. That´s not it at all.
I get nervous about a trend if I feel the balance between angst/darkness and other stuff is tipped so far to one side, that almost every update I get to read or 90 % of the stories currently being updated regularly take an extremely negative turn.
That is when I start to wonder if that is really all what spuffy reading is about, if it´s necessary.
I don´t think so.
I´ve been reading for a very long time now, more than 7 years, and there have been a vast amount of amazing stories that do have some angst, but don´t explore the bottom of the pit.
And that is what gets to me at the moment, I feel that out of 20 stories in maybe 4 months, at least 15 don´t only visit that bottom but turn every bit of waste there is down there, and while that is maybe close to the ugliness of reality, it doesn´t make for a satisfying read.
Anyway, I wouldn´t stop reading one of your stories, just because there is a chapter which I liked not as much as the rest.
Author's Response: Well I hope that I am able to redeem myself and my story! I don't always go dark, but I do like to push the envelope. Thank you so much for being an avid reader. I really appreciate that and your reviews!
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2010 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
It´s not only that this development pisses me off, as you said it so eloquently, it´s more importantly, that you´re the next in an increasing number of authors who seem to think that pissing off the spuffy reader as well as one can is the way to go.
Well, it´s not, and contrary to the momentary belief being en vogue, it also doesn´t make a story better or more thrilling.
Author's Response: My dearest Angel,
I am not intentionally trying to anger my readers, but I am trying to stay true to my muse. This is how the story progressed in my mind, so be it. You have to remember, when there is light, there has to be dark. Good with the bad. One cannot exist without the other. I felt and continue to feel, that it would be a great disservice to my readers to write fluff, if the story is labeled angst. I'm sorry that you are angry and I appreciate your review, but I still hold firm to my beliefs and I am proud of this story, and myself as an author. I suggest that in the future if you don't want angst or drama, you should read a story that is labeled 'fluff'. I do hope that you continue with this story. As I said before there will be a happy ending. If you feel that you can't continue, then so be it, and I hope in the future authors don't disappoint you, as you claim that I have.
[Report This]Date: 01/20/2010 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
i think you do angelus justice. yes you make him scarier and in ur face but i always imagined hed be more psycho than he was in the show. cant wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: *blush* thank you! Like I said in a previous response to a review, I feel that Joss probably wanted to write him more twisted than he did. I truly believe that. To be honest, I love writing the sadist bastard!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
Pity Buffy can't pretend to be bored!
Author's Response: well, Angelus receiving 'services' from Drusilla is like a huge accident. we try to look away but we can't!
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2010 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
*phew* Glad they found Spike, he looks bad.
Hope the spell will works, Buffy needs every help she can get. *sigh*
At last she is still alive.
Author's Response: He'll bounce back. It's true, Buffy is going to need major help.
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2010 - 09:45 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Love the scenes Spike being trapped with holy water bowls and the fact that Angelus is so obsessed with Buffy can't wait for Dru's downfall I was hoping he would have staked her for touching what he thinks is his but the voyerism works too.
Author's Response: Thanxs. I wanted to come up with something original. Angelus doesn't want him to die, he wants him to suffer.
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2010 - 08:03 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Shudders for Buffy and Spike. Glad that Spike was rescued, now if only Drusilla and Angelus will leave Buffy alone long enough to have her located by the others. Look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks, more will be coming soon
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2010 - 06:07 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
wow angelus is a damn sick bastard! and look at buff getting her perv on watching them! ha ha. keep them coming! i want some spike to the rescue!!
Author's Response: I know you probably don't want to hear this, but I LOVE writing Angelus! I feel that Joss held back. I think it was more due to the big wigs. NOT his choice. Because when Angel becomes Angelus in his own series, he is much worse than in Season 2 of Buffy.
[Report This]Date: 01/14/2010 - 12:22 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
As always a good chapter. Interesting to see what Angelus is planing to do with them.
Author's Response: Thanks. Angelus' evil minds a churnin!
[Report This]Date: 01/14/2010 - 08:38 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
aww what will happen to our hero and heroine???!!! cant wait to find out == you are killing me with the suspense!!
Author's Response: Sorry...but what a way to go!
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2010 - 01:24 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
I'm on the edge of my seat! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: More will be coming soon...I promise
[Report This]Date: 01/12/2010 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
I feared the worst when Buffy went alone and found Angelus and Drusilla. Sadly I was right but it's too late now anyway. Not good, really not good for Buffy and Spike. :(
Author's Response: Running off your emotions are not always of the good.
[Report This]Date: 01/12/2010 - 04:22 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Excellent chapter, and such an evil cliffhanger! You are so evil.
Author's Response: Maahaa! Thanks for enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2010 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Hmmm. What did they sprinkle on the vics? I eagerly await the next chapter. Thanks for continuing.
Author's Response: It will be explained in the next chapter, keep reading!
[Report This]Date: 01/10/2010 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Whose wings did dru clip?? Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Uncle Enios, Jenny's Gypsy uncle.
[Report This]Date: 01/10/2010 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Hot Spuffyness :)
So it was the kill of the Gypsies that Drusilla things will change things.
Looking forward what consequences will that bring upon Buffy and Spike.
Author's Response: Even though she's insane, she does know. Creepy isn't she?
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