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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wesley is a friend or just helpful. I'm sad that he died in the original series. Oh right, W&H is a worldwide organization. So the car Wesley offered was meant for England / in England. Too bad they can't keep the car (or can they?).
*nods* about what Spike said regarding the bank robbery. Even if I haven't read the comics I think that brought them trouble (not sure).
They wear uniforms? Not a a police officer does that when going under cover (and slayers don't want to be seen, they just need to slay). No thief would try to steal something with a cop in sight. ;)
~ This Spike here isn't fixed on Buffy having forgotten that he loved her. He let his eyes stray... hopefully not more, that would hurt Buffy.
Must not be easy for her. ~ The fight was hot, though.

Author's Response: I liked Wes too and was sad he died and that he didn't get Fred. Well, not really uniforms, but so similar that they might be taken for that. It's Giles indulging his wish for a private army he can control. Thank you for liking the fight! That was fun.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 - 08:41 am Title: Chapter 5

Good to see Xander maturing a bit so he isn't a 'baddy' in this fic. Anya had just as much choice about staying to fight as he did and Willow and Dawn and the others... eevryone except Buffy. She knew what she was getting into and stayed anyway. Not so sure about Giles' motivations yet. Love the interaction between Spike & the Potentials who had been at Sunnydale. Interesting to see Buffy being the chaser and getting a taste of her own medicine. Spike's comments about the uniforms and the morality of taking even criminals' money are helping to get Buffy really thinking about what's going on with Giles and the 'New' Council. Now she's no longer mourning she can stop drifting through life and sit up to take notice.

Author's Response: Anya's death made him grow up. The Potentials would value Spike. They know what he did. Reversing the roles was fun. I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: lulu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter 5

I admire your discipline in being able to complete an entire story before posting, and I wanted to thank you. I love your stories so much, I can never stop myself from reading each eagerly-anticipated chapter as soon as it comes out! I don't think I could have stood it if I had to wait a whole week between chapters, especially in this story! I love the layers you're showing us, and the different questions about Giles, Angel and his team, Buffy/Spike, Spike's memories... You're handling a lot but doing it so gracefully readers don't feel weighed down or lost, just drawn into the story! Love it! And now I have to wait a whole day before reading the next chapter, but it's so great that it's so soon!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! This world is so real to me; it plays like a movie in my head. I think that's why I can write it so easily. And I hate to leave readers hanging! Been there myself! :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 - 04:06 am Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter!

Giles is such a realistic not-just-villain with such real moral dilemmas facing not only him, but Willow and Buffy and every girl suddenly endowed with power. I love how Spike is still Spike, even wtihout his memory, and his clear sight and honesty show through, along with his snarky tendencies. I do wonder, though, if Buffy's willingness to take anything he's willing to give her will keep him from loving her, because he might not consider her not being there and caring for him from his now limited experience.

The Giles-Angel comparisons, and Buffy's wariness about them, were great. Love that she demanded Spike talk to her about 'her own good' and that he told her to do the same for him. Equal. Wes' not being blind to Angel's faults and able to question his decisions was also shown well. I've been struggling with reading a fic where the author kept Angel wonderful and charming and noble and without flaw, except for the curse, and I wanted to pull my hair out. Of course Angel has flaws! Of course he's got layers! Stop making him so perfect!

I wonder about Spike's moment of distraction was about, absently watching Willow during the meeting after she hears Vi tell her in her head that most of the Slayers gathered in the gym. Foreshadow, anyone? LOL

Author's Response: At this point in time, Giles would be easily seduced by the new power he's not accustomed to. The fascinating thing about BtVS is that all the characters have major flaws and Angel is not exempt. I adore Spike, and he too is seriously flawed, but that caring lover / evil killer dichotomy is so compelling! :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter 5

Must be hard for Buffy loving him and have him not even remembering her. Still wonder what Giles has up his sleeve. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: At least he won' t hurt her the way she did him. And Giles is walking a very slippery slope. Thank you for liking it!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 5

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for addressing all that is so wrong about S8 ( besides the obvious..that Spike is not there) You hit the nail on the head, dreamweaver! And this Giles is a complete jerk, as he was in S7 in case anyone missed that. He isn't even grateful to Spike for saving the world for pete's sake. LOVED the Spike love from the SunnyD potentials. Yay! And Willow and Xander were actually nice. It's good to see Xander thinking. He lost Anya, he should be more mature.

Loved the S/B fight and the kissing! HOT!

Don't listen to anonymous reviewers who are rude and have nothing nice to say...this is a BRILLIANT story and you are a great writer who ALWAYS gives us Amazing Spuffy stories!

Loved it and am looking forward to tomorrow's posting. :)

Author's Response: I haven't read the S8 comics, but what I've heard about them upset me, and I'm working out some of my issues here. :D I was a little hurt by that reviewer. It seemed a personal attack rather than a valid criticism. I'm so glad you like my work! Thank you!

Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 - 01:36 am Title: Chapter 5

I love the role reversal... And the way Buffy is dealing with it.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thank you! It seemed only fair.

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