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Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter 6

This was a great chappie. Loved the Spike/Dawn convo.Something that should have happened on the show. And I like Buffy saying both she and Spike had done wrong. Exactly. Totally agree. All the points Spike made are spot on. ITA. Why were all these girls made Slayers? I HATED that, it made no sense. and now they're all herded together with no family or boyfriends, controlled by one man. What kind of love lives are they supposed to have? OMG that is so wrong!

All those demons popping in has me worried. Who's responsible?

Yay! for the hot Spuffyness, love the way you write the Spuffy lovin. Hope Spike remembers soon.:) The only thing I think could be better is if Spike were a little more vocal during sex...I think Spike is the talk dirty kind ,it adds alot to the Spuffy sex. Just my opinion.:)

Loved this so much, you're one of my fave authors!

Author's Response: That got me too, when I heard of the comics. None of it really made sense, right down to their being activated. That's why I questioned it here. Talking dirty? Cute idea. But I'm not sure. He'd do it if if was just sex. But when he's in love, especially when he's got the soul, he gets too intense for that. In my next story however, he doesn't have a soul and he isn't in love with Buffy. I might try it and see how it works. I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter 6

Sounds like another apolcolypse.. and please no sacrificial Spike again..

enjoying.. and Buffy did come up with a good way to take his mind off the negative..

Author's Response: No sacrificial Spike. But there will be other problems. :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 - 01:23 am Title: Chapter 6

Well, I think you broke me! There were words about how insightful Spike is, and about the S/D reunion, and then Spike and Buffy met in the hallway, and they all flew away.

That was...and with the...!

I can haz more tomorrow? Pls??

Author's Response: Whoa! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! More coming. :D

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 - 12:13 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow, you update fast. Not complaining because I love it when my favorite stories have a fast update. But after reading the first two chapters. I came back and saw that you have posted 4 new chapters since. I have yet to read them but I will a little later tonight when I have more time. Just wanted to say that I love you quick updates especially since you are one of my must read writers right now. Like I said I can tell we think so much alike just by reading your stories. Bye.

Author's Response: I hate to leave readers hanging, so I don't start to post until the whole story is done and all I have to do is clean up each chapter. That way I can post a chapter a day until it's over. I'm so glad you agree with the way I think! Some people get mad. I'm so glad you like it! Thank you!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 6

Spike raises excellent points... why train an army if you're not expecting a war? So someone's sending (or summoning) the Chiriwan... wonder who?... and why? Now then... will the lovemaking and a draught of Slayer blood bring Spike's memory back?

Author's Response: I have issues with the comics. Does it show? :D I wanted to raise questions. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 6

Wow, you're early today! So I have a chance to catch the new chapter. Even if that means no chapter tomorrow if posted at the normal time. ;)
A lot of slayers got activated where before was only one (well planned to be only one). That must create a lot of unbalance. I wonder sometimes it that wouldn't cause something.
Buffy was strong because she had friends and family; the slayers have only the other slayers.
Spike had some good ideas what the slayers could do; they even could be paid for patrolling (bodyguards). Better than robbing a bank.
And a lot of people and a busy Buffy when Spike wanted some alone time. *g*
A leaders work never ends, huh?
Chiriwan mmmh I wonder if someone sent them.
It sounds now that Spike's memory is coming back, slowly.
Again, not easy for Buffy to give Spike freedom and more, saying she loves him.
And making new memories. Good thought :) And hot.
~ Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Got home early from work. :) Yes, the baby Slayers only have each other and that's not right. So I thought they should have the opportunity to make their own lives and loves. I'm so glad you're liking it! Thank you!

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