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Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2011 - 01:26 pm Title: Prologue & Chapter One: The Slayer Of Slayers

enjoyed..
ready to see what happens with the Spike-Buffy meet up..

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2010 - 03:39 pm Title: Prologue & Chapter One: The Slayer Of Slayers

I like this! I like how you use known characters in this way. It will be interesting to see how things are with Buffy and her group. And when the groups meets that will be great.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far. The next chapter should be around the weekend. Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2010 - 04:52 am Title: Prologue & Chapter One: The Slayer Of Slayers

oh please give us more!! such a lovely beginning and to think - it kinda makes sense if the humans have a sacred fighter/defender why not the demons too. i mean bad comes in all shapes, sizes, skin colors, and souls. and thank you for bringing in Lawson!! Im absolutely in love with his character, they should have kept him on longer.
um question -- is tara in high school? so shes the same age as buffy and friends? i assumed so but just curious. there where a few grammatical errors and typos but nothing that caused a problem with the story (the critique is just to help of couse!)
a very touching and closenit family you have written. i thought the story was wonderful overall!! it is certainly sparked my interest and I await more soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Well, since we know that not all demons are evil (I mean, can you even begin to imagine Clem evil by any stretch of the imagination), they should need some protection too. In my mind (at least for this story) three sections to the PTB- the ones who created Buffy are good, the Senior Partners are evil, and then there's the group in the middle that's grey...I think of them as more or less balance, and they're the ones who created the Slayer of Slayers. I will get more into that eventually. Yes! Another Lawson fan!! I have the biggest fan girl crush on him! I wish they had kept him around too. He had such an interesting back story, and he seemed to go further into the idea that not all vampires are evil. Not to mention he was pretty good looking. lol Yes, Tara is in high school. Since they were all the same age in collage, I went ahead and made Tara 16-17 in the fic. I'm glad you like how closeknit I made their 'family'. They've been together for a long time and been through a lot (as I'll get to later), and when you're with someone for that long, they become family. As for grammer, yes I know. No matter how many times I read over something, I always seem to make mistakes somewhere. lol. I hate grammer and spelling. As of next chapter, I have a beta though, so they should be coming out more error free. I also plan to have the next chapter out sometime next week. Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2010 - 09:33 pm Title: Prologue & Chapter One: The Slayer Of Slayers

I like the start a lot; good twist with the second council.
And Spike being protective of Tara, making sure she gets to school and getting trained by a witch too.
Spike having to claim ownership about the Hell mouth and then being stuck there? Together with the slayer. Good twist too.
Plus Spike&Lawson friendship stories, I like a lot too (Maryperk has some good ones).
I definitely look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm a sucker for the Spike-Dawn relationship because of how cute and big brother/little sister is, and since I can't have Dawn in that spot here, Tara was my next choice. I love Tara/Spike friendships fics. I also love Lawson- he was in one episode and I have a total fangirl crush on him ( I've read Maryperk's stuff featuring Lawson, and they are very good. Actually, they're what made me think of adding him to the Spikettes). I hope to have the next chapter out next week, so we'll see how it goes! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Elly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2010 - 07:02 pm Title: Prologue & Chapter One: The Slayer Of Slayers

This is a very good story. I'm anxious to see where this will go.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I hope to have the next chapter out sometime next week. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2010 - 06:00 pm Title: Prologue & Chapter One: The Slayer Of Slayers

I really love this so far, and can't wait till Spike and Buffy meet. Sparks will be flying for sure. Hope to read more soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Yes- sparks will fly. It IS Spuffy after all? What would Spuffy be without sparks? I hope to have the next chapter out next week sometime. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Jelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2010 - 03:40 pm Title: Prologue & Chapter One: The Slayer Of Slayers

Love the different perspective. I'm looking forward to reading more of it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm gald you're enjoying the different perspective, and I hope to have the next chapter out next week. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2010 - 03:16 pm Title: Prologue & Chapter One: The Slayer Of Slayers



Author's Response: Oh....mystery review. lol

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