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Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2010 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Three

Just caught up and I'm loving this story! I especially LOVE Elizabeth and how she went storming in there to put him his place. He needs a woman with a strong hand because he deserved a few more slaps. Don't feel bad at all with what Buffy did with Margaret. It's dangerous to lose your virtue as a servant during that time, if you get pregnant...oh boy, that is trouble! Can't wait to see them fight some more, should be a lot of fun! I'm sure he's not going to be too happy about quenching his "thirst".

Author's Response: Hey girl! Haven't heard from you in awhile! There will be plenty of fightin' words between these two. Fine line between love and hate...

Reviewer: Eternal Love Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2010 - 07:11 pm Title: Chapter Three

Really liking this so far. It's so different from all other stories I've read. I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying and that it's different. More will be coming soon!

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2010 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter Three

P.S. I don't want you to think I am all about the banners but I have to say the first one is very beautiful but this one has sizzle. Pari does do very good work.

Author's Response: Doesn't she! I love this one! I wanted to wait on using it...but my inner child wanted it now!!!

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2010 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter Three

I have been anxious to read more my mind has worked out scenarios since you have begun this story. I love the confrontation and how she handled her servant although to pair them up was not necessarily a way to deter him since he is willing to take on two. I can only hope that the dismissal of Margaret to kitchen duty will be somewhat a deterrent that will make the Duke lonely despite his silver tongue. On a different topic there was something said that seem to change the first chapter the Duke looked forward to retrieving her and mentioned it as someone new to warm his bed and in this one it was a no touch for she belonged to the King. Please continue the story I do love it. Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: The end of the first chapter when it was written another willing woman to warm his bed, it was not referring to Buffy, it was another woman for sir William to bring to his bed before he left for France. He looked forward to retrieving her, for the King, not himself. Thanks for your enjoyment!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2010 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter Three

The attraction is there but it is one-sided. With the King in the came - wanting Buffy - things will complicated. I don't think Buffy can avoid (handle) the kind like she did William.
Buffy may be in danger.

Author's Response: Buffy has never been subjected to a man before in this way. What she is feeling is confusing to her. She feels something, but doesn't know quite what to do with it. No danger...all will work out I assure you! thanks for the review

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2010 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Three

Enjoyed..

Need to go back and reread..

Are the King and William the same age.. For the King to remember Elizabeth's mother.. maybe a young boy in love with an older "woman".. And Elizabeth - 17..

Enjoying. And so the Queen's court is just a cover up for the King's Ladies Waiting to get into his bed?

Pam .. enjoyed

Author's Response: William is slightly older, two years. the explanation about Lady Summers being the King's mother's lady in waiting will be explained. No, no love for an older woman. He just remembers her. No, the KIng is not Buffy's father. He was a young boy when Lady Summers was around, that much I will tell you. Yes, bringing Buffy to court as the Queen's lady is a cover-up, for the King wanting to take Buffy to bed. How else could he explain to the Queen and others the reason for the surquester? I'm glad that you are enjoying!

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