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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2010 - 07:41 am Title: Chapter 4

Nauti things to come. Love her wayward approach. And her little mini cry over Giles. Spike will always be there, that's for sure. Fabulous. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! Actually chapter 5 is done and posted. Hope you get to it!

Reviewer: Eternal Love Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2010 - 04:01 am Title: Chapter 4

I hadn't realized this story had been updated... I thought I was supposed to be alerted when you updated... hmm. This is too good I need more!

Author's Response: Thanks girl! more will be coming soon. Maybe drop a line to Pari about the non-updateage

Reviewer: Angels_heart1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2010 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 4

That was cute!! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks sweety!

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2010 - 08:53 am Title: Chapter 4

Buffy's being very bold! Go girl.

Author's Response: I know...finally!

Reviewer: Akela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2010 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 4

OMG! is she really going to do it? I hope so. I am loving every single word of this. The emotion rolling off the page as i read is incredible. Thank you. Please update soon. :)

Author's Response: Buffy and Spike...no way! You're going to have to keep reading! I *blush* from your review Akela! Hugs!!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2010 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 4

First: your spacing is a bit off, if that happened by accident, Pari was asking about it here.

Buffy was dreaming of chocolate covered Spike, huh? :)
But Giles will only be gone a week and then come back, no need for Buffy to be sad.
Evil cliffhanger. ;)
Till next part.

Author's Response: Yeah, I was the one that let Pari know of this. Evil
! I fixed it manually. The same that I said for magnus, you have to remember Riley had just left her. In addition to her past of men leaving, Giles leaving just reminded her of all those that had left before. Next part will be coming soon!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2010 - 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 4

nice! Evil leaving it there! lovin your fic!

Author's Response: Mahaawha! I'm evil aren't I? I so glad that you are enjoying my story!

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2010 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 4

Hello. I can't help you with ideas, because I'm not good with words. I just want to ask you to keep writing because I like this story and I would like to read the end of it. Update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: What you said was perfect! Thank you for your review and your enjoyment of my story

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2010 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 4

Things are going well it seems. A bit overreaction from Buffy about Giles being away for a week.

Author's Response: I don't feel that she was overreacting. You have to remember, in the period of five years, four men have left her. Her father, Angel, Parker and the most recently Riley. If you remember the episode of Triangle, which follows right after this one, Buffy became very upset numerous times when she heard Xander and Anya fighting. Fearing that they were breaking up. At one point she cried and said they had a "forever love" and they couldn't break up. Her reaction may seem extreme, but you have to remember what she has been through with men in her life.

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