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Reviewer: sweetprincipale Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2011 - 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 24, Lucky to Have You

Oh my goodness, so tragic, but such a beautiful ending. So simple and understated, just how it should have been! Well done you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is one of my very favorite chapters ... so tragic, but at the same time showing how much Spike loves and supports Buffy and finally Xander coming around, seeing Spike's loyalty and love for his friend. I'm glad you liked it ... it really is one of my very favorites. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here, I do love hearing from you! -P4S 2011.04.21

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2010 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 24, Lucky to Have You

Wow! Batch postings! I've just caught right up with this fic so far and have to tell you how much I'm loving it. Parts feel a bit rushed, but that's probably because you're not doing a compete re-write of all the seasons - which would take forever and rehash events we're all very familiar with. I would like to know why the Mayor didn't try to become a giant demon snake at graduation and how they dealt with Glory though. I'm still waiting for Riley to come back and try to get back at Buffy & Spike too. Love little Annie instead of Dawn - although am I allowed to say I miss Dawn? More please.

Author's Response: Hi! There was like one line that dealt with the mayor . . . right after the band candy incident, Faith, Spike and Buffy tracked down Mr. Trick and put an end to the mayor's assention before it even got started. . . it's in there somewhere . . but I didn't go into details of it. The story is over 50 chapters in total, so trying to deal with each threat would've been - - shoo - - - maybe more than I could handle! But, we will DEFINATELY deal with Glory . . I thought about naming Annie "Dawn" and channeling her here, but I really thought that Buffy would've gone with William's mother's name so I didn't. I'm glad you're liking it - sorry some of it seems rushed. Maybe later I can even go back and fill in some of the things that I skimmed over in separate stories. Thanks so much for posting a review! I makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! more is on the way! -Passion4Spike 2010.04.01

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