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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 - 03:32 am Title: Chapter 30, Try Harder

Not trying to be witchy, but how did this get nominated for cover to cover? Not that this story isn't good, nor that it doesn't desire nominations, but it's not finished. Sorry to be a b*tch, but that nomination is only for finished stories. Either way congrats.

Author's Response: Hi. Actually, it is finished. The full story is posted on my web site - I simply haven't had time to to get it all uploaded onto TSR yet. . . . -Passion4Spike 2010.04.23

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2010 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter 30, Try Harder

I had a bit of trouble accepting that Spike would urge Willow to bring Buffy back, but you've made it sound quite logical. So glad he's got her to tell him she was in Heaven - perhaps they can both begin to heal now.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and posting. Glad I could get across why he needed her back - how broken he was. There'll be more along those lines in the next chapter, too. I'll post more later today! Thanks again!! -Passion4Spike 2010.04.07

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2010 - 09:59 am Title: Chapter 30, Try Harder

I'm so happy you updated. I really hope they work things out, because they belong together. Hopefully Spike's love will help her cope with being back and all.
Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and posting! She still has a ways to go, but I think Spike has an idea to help her - I'll post more later today. Thanks again!! -Passion4Spike 2010.04.07

Reviewer: westwingwolf Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2010 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 30, Try Harder

I think this was an amazingly done chapter. I've really liked the story as a whole so far, but this chapter made it for me. I could understand Buffy's anguish as much as Spike's and could side with both of them. I really felt the heartbreak in their words. It's a tough situation with no right or wrong side and that's what makes it life. I know it will be tough for them but I hope they can find a way to make it work and I think the end of this chapter shows there is hope.

Author's Response: I know I'm a little weird, but your review gave me goose bumps! Thank you so much!! It really means a lot that others can feel what I'm trying to bring out in the characters - it really makes me feel great! I'll have more soon - she still has a ways to go, but now Spike can help her. -Passion4Spike 2010.04.06

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