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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 - 06:39 pm Title: The Wedding Night

So thoughtful (considerate) of William to be so careful with Buffy, he made it easier for her.
Good chapter, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you. Next is their honeymoon in Malaga where things get more intense.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 - 01:22 pm Title: The Wedding Night

It was very nice.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 - 05:08 am Title: The Wedding Night

I love how romantic you made the wedding night, it was about their love for each other and how their bodies solidified their union. The tender way that William deflowered Elizabeth showed just how much he cared for her and Elizabeth's innocent actions and emotions were endearing. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you. That's exactly what I wanted to portray. Later, yes, there will be some good old fashioned scromp fests but the wedding night/deflowering had to be romance.

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