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Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 03:46 pm Title: Surprises

This tantrum is almost overdue for Buffy and I'm surprised Spike didn't see it coming. But I guess he hasn't done a lot of kidnapping. And while I see that Spike is trying to do for her as much as he can, being kind to her while she's captive is a bit hard to reconcile, especially on a birthday.

I'm very curious what Spike's plans could be at this point. He does seem like he's made a nice cage for his pretty bird and has no other plans at this point, but I wonder, especially since we are only seeing it from Buffy's POV.

Looking forward to more and who this new character is.

Author's Response: Thank you, thats the reason its in Buffy's point of view, because it lends to Spike's mystery and puts you guys in her place more...so I'm glad you're thinking all those things, means I'm doing something right! And as for the character...it might be someone new...or it might be someone we've met before ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 03:10 pm Title: Surprises

Keeping Buffy prisoner is weighting down both on Spike and on Buffy. Not sure how long that will go well. The try to give Buffy something on her birthday (because of his bad conscience) showed it can't go on this way.
What a mess....

Author's Response: Indeed, in fact in a few Chapters time Buffy will say exactly that, and Spike will start to listen...and thats when their dynamic will start to evolve differently...hope you'll still be reading then! Thanx for the review!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 03:31 am Title: Surprises

This story just keeps getting more and more interesting. I can not wait to see what happens when the next character shows up. The Happy fucking birthday was priceless. OMG. What a pair. Thanks for the update. I was just thinking about this story.

Author's Response: Thankyou for the review! I've not got any email alerts about reviews for this Chapter for some reason and I was so depressed, I thought no one had reviewed it, then I came on and saw all the lovely reviews, I'm a happy bunny!

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2010 - 02:28 am Title: Surprises

Hello, Spike, YOU ARE HOLDING HER AGAINST HER WILL!!!!!!!!! What do you expect her to do, jump for joy cause you baked her a birthday cake

Author's Response: Lol glad you can see Buffy's side...Spike's just got a temper on him, and Buffy's standing in his way of an easy life, he thinks she should just deal with the situation and except it...he's being an idiot! I love writing frustrated Buffy!

Reviewer: amayuscula Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2010 - 02:11 pm Title: Surprises

I liked the chapter. I hope that you try to update as soon as you can, because I want to read more.

Author's Response: Thankyou! Stayed up writing and editing all last night so the next two Chapters are almost done!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2010 - 03:03 am Title: Surprises

enjoyed, thanks for the update

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: Ellie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2010 - 01:55 am Title: Surprises

Finally! I've been dying for an update. this story is very well written and you've got me hooked. Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thats awesome! Glad I've got you hooked! There will be more soon, I've got the muse right now so I'm writing a fair bit!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2010 - 11:55 pm Title: Surprises

oh my... i think i would have gone crazy too in her position. he kidnaps her and then brings her cake like it's just another normal day for her and not a prison. i mean.. he wants her to be comfortable i guess but... i swear i would have snapped too =) and i won't even mention the part where she has no window or other connection to the outside world but him..and that just 3 times per day... she's good =)
can't wait to see who the 3rd player is gonna be =)

Author's Response: Thankyou! Most people tend to be biased and not like stropy Buffy in stories regardless of why she is throwing a tantrum. I'm pleased everyone is seeng Buffy's side, because she is in the right. Spike is just stuck in a situation he doesn't want to be in, he doesn't know what to do, all he knows is that if Buffy plays along it'll be easier for him and so he expects her to do just that...update soon! Things get worse for Buffy!

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