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Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2010 - 07:16 pm Title: More Than Words

Sorry it took me so long to read, but now I have 3 chappies...so Yay!

I'm with Andrew here...2 gorgeous, golden Spikes, what could be better? *swoons* LOL! Loved the whole chappie, from the beginning with naughty Buffy wanting to be Double Spiked to the end and the claim ceremony and the Naughty Spikes bringing Buffys to orgasm IN FRONT OF ANGEL! *cackle* I have an intense dislike of Angel again since the comics..they're totally pissing me off, so any Buffy/Spike claim story, with the added bonus of Angel witnessing the Hotness that is Spuffy is all right by me. :)

And don't think I didn't notice your line about their passion for Spike...sneaky author. ;)

So they're at W&H, so now I know sumthing BAD is about to happen.Off to read the badness coming up...evil, evil P4S! *hugs*

Author's Response: LOL! Hi AMI!! I can't get anything past you ... can't hide my Passion for Spike, either! :D

I loved Buffy wanting to double her fun...@__@ {{eyes glaze over at the thought!) What's better than one Spike!? Well, two, of course!

Sorry to say, but yeah, they're at W&H and with Angel, so you KNOW something bad is about to happen!! Look out!

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here!! I always love hearing from you!!
-P4S 2010.08.28

Reviewer: A Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2010 - 08:52 am Title: More Than Words

Agreed with LisaV. If a summary takes more than two full pages of scrolling down, it's not funny or cute; it means I'm not going to read the story.

You can always include more of the summary in the text of the first chapter if you like.

Author's Response: Hi A - - - sorry!! All fixed now. I didn't think about that when I did it!! I'll know in the future if I have a long explanation to do it differently!!

My apologies!!

-P4S 2010.08.28

Reviewer: lisaV Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2010 - 06:33 am Title: More Than Words

Could you fix the summary? Taking too much space in the recent page. Very annoyting.

Author's Response: OK - sure ... sorry. Put it there so I wouldn't have to remind everyone in the story itself, but didn't realize the problem. Will do right now ... Thanks for telling me!! -P4S 2010.08.28

Author's Response: Fixed!! Sorry!!

Reviewer: westwingwolf Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2010 - 05:37 am Title: More Than Words

Let's hope this Angel doesn't turn out to be a tool or you know more of a tool like the other one. I'm so happy the bond is back. I know you're just trying to provoke me every time Spike mentions something about not getting to be outside in the light with Annie. Well, that was all happy and good, so when is the other shoe going to drop and all the bad show up?

Author's Response: Hi westwingwolf.... Oh yes, I always add that sunshine and Gem thing in there just for you... I know I can get a rise out of you over it! :D

The other shoe will be dropping right about .... now... Will post the next chapter shortly!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I always love hearing from you and no, I haven't forgotten about the Gem .... never!
-P4S 2010.08.27

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2010 - 02:13 pm Title: More Than Words

It was good, if a bit confusing

Author's Response: Hi Magnus ... I'm sorry that it was confusing ... I know there are a lot of characters and stuff going on from all different 'worlds' in there. If there's anything particular that I can help clarify, email me directly and I'll try to help! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I always love hearing from you!

-P4S 2010.08.27

Reviewer: vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2010 - 04:52 am Title: More Than Words

Their bond is back and the dimensional experience and ceremony was beautifully written. Felt sorry for the Dawn left alone in another dimension, too bad Buffy and Spike cannot take her with them. What's one more added to the mix anyway, it is not like Annie would mind having a sister with her kind of abilities. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi vette! Yay for the bond being back... I missed it! That's a thought about going to the other dimension and getting Dawn one day... hopefully a much better behaved and less whiny Dawn than she was when she was younger! :O

Thanks so much for reading and posting here! I love hearing from you!! Will have more soon!

P4S 2010.08.26

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