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Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2010 - 10:07 am Title: Won't Want for Love

this is totally different from what i read of Spuffy stories so far and i'm very interested in this one :)
he growled? ohmygosh.. is he going to be something more feral than a fawn??
please update soon *batts eyelashes*

Author's Response: I am trying to make it much more like a fairy tale because I feel like the characters could do just as well in that kind of setting. I'm really glad you are enjoying it though! As far as being feral, while William keeps pieces of his human persona by day, he keeps some of his animal persona by night. More should show up later ;) Thank you for reviewing! Hopefully I will post later today or tomorrow.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2010 - 09:00 pm Title: Won't Want for Love

Sounds s if William didn't get in that much trouble like I feared.
Good that the spell was lifted - I think. I wonder why that was important. Would have been mean if they didn't see the other because of the spell.

Author's Response: Well, part of the trouble he got into lead to the invisibility spell. It will be moderately important later on.

Reviewer: annie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2010 - 02:09 am Title: Won't Want for Love

Lovely update :D I don't really care for Queen Dru, but rarely do I like Dru's character in any story. She seems a mite too possessive, no? ;) Anyway, still looking forward to how it all will unfold.

"...leaves whispered as they grazed the ground. Innerving as it was, Buffy kept her fears at bay and continued into the depths. ..."

and right there, don't you mean Unnerving? :D (nitpick, thy name is Annie)


Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you are enjoying it (sans Dru). I normally wouldn't make Dru so possessive, but I'm basing the story loosely on the album Hazards of Love, and in it she is scarily possessive; it's the only way the rest of the story works. Besides, Dru is a bit crazy... haha. Thank you for the nitpicking, I fixed it :) I hope you continue to read and enjoy this and thank you for the review!

Reviewer: LexieAnnMalfoy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2010 - 08:44 pm Title: Won't Want for Love

they're together, wonder what going to happen next. Love the pixies she so wouldn't be Dru with out the pixies.

Author's Response: I love the idea of the pixies as well. I felt like I could finally put them in a story :) They'll show up again. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2010 - 01:11 am Title: A Bower Scene

Can't wait. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm so glad you're enjoying it

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2010 - 09:38 pm Title: A Bower Scene

Sounds as if William had got himself in trouble, telling about Buffy.
Looking forward too what Buffy will find.

Author's Response: I have some plans in mind :) Thank you for reviewing! You are so sweet :)

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2010 - 03:11 am Title: A Bower Scene

I am surprised that she could stay away so long and what of William; I wonder what has happened to him during this time.

Author's Response: Well, I'm going to go into it further in the next chapter, but basically Hank kept her under lock and key for a while and she didn't have a chance to leave. As for William... he is dealing with some problems of his own. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: annie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2010 - 12:46 pm Title: Prelude: The Hazards of Love

very interesting plot. haven't really heard this fairytale before, but would love to see more of this. :D

Author's Response: It's a newer fairy tale, even though it takes place about the same time as, well, all other fairy tales :) I'm glad you like it and I hope you continue to read! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2010 - 09:05 pm Title: Prelude: The Hazards of Love

A lot of warnings (but good to know the rape is only an attempted one). Hope the character death won't be a major character death.
Besides that, I love fairy tales. :)
More please?

Author's Response: Those are just potential warnings as of now. I know that the attempted rape will happen, but I haven't written the entire story yet. I'm glad you like it so far! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: KTC10 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2010 - 08:25 pm Title: Prelude: The Hazards of Love

The Hazards of Love is my probably my favorite album! I'm excited to see who you cast as the Rake and I hope William and Buffy fare better than William and Margaret! Can't wait to see how this turns out!

Author's Response: I know!! I love the Decemberists and I absolutely adore this album. This will vary from the album because it would be impossible to let Buffy be kind of weak... but I hope to do the album justice. As far as the ending... I'm hoping it will be a happy one, but there's no telling where it could go. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2010 - 05:40 pm Title: Prelude: The Hazards of Love

I like it so far. I love fairy tales, Brother Grimm style, not Disney.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it :) I love Disney fairy tales, but darker ones, like Grimm, are always more interesting to read.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2010 - 04:20 pm Title: Prelude: The Hazards of Love

Interesting start. Poor little fawn. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and I hope you continue to read it!

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