Date: 06/13/2012 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Good story. 1st 2 chapters were to heavy on the "telling," too light on "showing" through dialogue. Those chapters also moved a bit too quickly through big changes to give them their proper impact, but I understand you wanted to hurry to the heart of your story (but the result was that they do feel rushed).
The lovemaking is hot, though!
Date: 04/12/2011 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yeah, I always thought that a demon who would voluntarily seek a soul probably already had one. Sweet story.
Date: 03/25/2011 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter 5
Good story. Ends well. Thanks.
Date: 12/25/2010 - 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
very sweet. i liked how their friendship developed slowly, and then it became ... more. very nicely done!
Date: 12/25/2010 - 07:05 am Title: Chapter 5
Loved it! Great Story!
Date: 12/23/2010 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
Good that Spike still has super human strength etc.; this way he is the most helpful for Buffy.
Enjoyed. :)
Date: 12/22/2010 - 05:06 am Title: Chapter 5
Glad they got their happy. Lovely story.
Date: 12/21/2010 - 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was nice, way better then just getting a soul.
Date: 12/21/2010 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter 5
Great story! I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D