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Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2010 - 11:36 am Title: Beware My Sting

oh my, that was hot, funny and literary! I loved the way you broke down that scene, interspersing it with their actions.

Author's Response: Yah! I was hoping it would play out well. Sometimes you get a fun idea in your head and then to write it down, it just doesn't work right. So, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: LexieAnnMalfoy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2010 - 01:56 am Title: Beware My Sting

I would love to see that scene live, it was wonderful. Great chapter.

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2010 - 11:32 pm Title: Beware My Sting

ah - now things are heating up (literally). hey, atleast she admitted to herself that she wasn't as unaffected as she wanted. that's a start. and i'm more of a 'kiss me kate' fan (the musical staring howard keel and kathryn grayson) and i quite recognized these wonderful passages. the more i read, the more i love this! SO can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2010 - 11:04 pm Title: Beware My Sting

Oh, god, that was great!!! Loved it. Looking forward to more! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2010 - 10:31 pm Title: Beware My Sting

Heh - they were both angry and it fit the scene perfectly. :)
A lot of turning in this chapter. *gg*

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2010 - 11:54 am Title: Beware My Sting

Loved this chapter...very well written. I could picture in my mind's eye them battling verbally and physically on the stage! Can't wait till more

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2010 - 11:21 am Title: Beware My Sting

Ah, Chemistry.. I am hot for you.. And when she finds out about the bet..if anything relationship does develop-out the window it will go..

Loved the scene though.. I can see Spike enjoying himself in more ways than one.. LOL

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2010 - 05:26 am Title: Beware My Sting

I am really into this story. It is so original. Like everything so far. Can't wait for the next update. Just how long can Buffy resist Spike? Hmmm...

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