Date: 01/22/2011 - 02:49 am Title: Chapter 3: The End
The PEN!! They should have listened to the pen! Those two may be better at breaking each other down than any two people, real or otherwise, but they are also better at building each other up. Right now I can only pray that the weather is on our side. And I guess I can thank the pen for trying. Great chapter. Such perfect emotion. Amazing.
Author's Response: LOL!!!!! When I read this, I bust out laughing! Yeah, we can give kudos to the pen for trying! HEHE! I agree completely, they always have a way to build and tear each other down. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. *big hugs*
Date: 01/10/2011 - 05:10 am Title: Chapter 3: The End
This is turning out to be a great story. You definitely have my attention. Please update soon. I am so into this one. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks SG! I hope I'm able to keep your attention until the end.
Date: 01/10/2011 - 03:00 am Title: Chapter 3: The End
oooh i cant wait to see how you get this two bak together! ill be looking out for the nxt chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for stopping by and giving this story a chance total geek! More will be coming soon, I promise
Date: 01/09/2011 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
Excellent sad, heartbreaking chapter. Your story is breaking my heart. God they still love each other so much, but they have just stopped talking. Agh! Hopefully her car won't start...just a suggestion. ;)
I was sniffling at the end, plz post more soon. I love this story.
Author's Response: Here's a tissue, AMI. I'm sorry the story is so sad, but I feel that you and many others find it so because so many times people find themselves in this position. They love each other so much, but all the bull gets in the way. I hope you'll read on. thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01/09/2011 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
Sad, emotional chapter but well written.
Looking forward to more to make it better again.
Author's Response: Thanks Cordy. Seeing your name always makes me smile : )
Date: 01/09/2011 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
As usual, fantastic.
Author's Response: Thanks Scooby and welcome to my world of fanfiction. I hope you'll enjoy your stay!
Date: 01/09/2011 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
Gosh, you write so well, D!
I too noticed that pen clicking thing and the cold leather as she put her coat back on and such - people concentrating on such things in those tense and ending situations.
By the time that the hugged, I was teary eyed and just screaming in my head: 'don't you dare let go of him, Buffy! hold on for the dear life!'
but then they parted and I really, really want to know what happened between those two. I mean, only 3 chapters into the story and I already feel so much for the two of them, like I'd have known them for alot more than that.
Love this story. Simply said :)
*hugs tight*
Author's Response: *big blushing* Thanks so much, Shard! I so can picture you cursing me for doing this, sorry but you know I love you, right? I'm glad you're enjoying my story. It means so much to me that you do.
Date: 01/09/2011 - 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
I really, really like this story. Emotive and full of promise, pain, passion........ Yeah. A very promising Spuffy.
Author's Response: Big thanks sue! I hope my story lives up to your expectations.
Date: 01/09/2011 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter 3: The End
I love this story. Its so well written, every minute detail prolongs the angst. I had a lump in my throat after reading this one. More please & soon
Author's Response: Thanks ss! I blush you find this so well written. More will be coming.
Date: 01/09/2011 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter 3: The End
I like the concentration on mundane activities in this chapter, like the detail about clicking the pen. Illustrated really well the intensity of the moment, the way people focus on odd things when they're very upset. The same could be said for Will gathering up a hand full of pens. Funny and sad at the same time.
Author's Response: I'm glad you picked up on this and found the meaning behind it, instead of seeing it as meaningless filler. Thanks!
Date: 01/09/2011 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter 3: The End
More More More!! I am absolutely hooked on this story loved this chapter. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I wished you left you name so I could thank you properly, but I'll try my best. Thank you, hidden viewer for taking the time to read and review this story. I will be updating soon.
Date: 01/08/2011 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
You 're killing me here! This is a great start to this story and I'm dying to find out what is causing Will to shut Buffy out?
Stop torturing me and post more soon!
Author's Response: Welcome Leanne! I love reading reviews, thanks for appeasing my desire! I'm sorry to torture you, but all will be revealed soon, my pretty!
Date: 01/08/2011 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
does nature now take things into their own hands...causing the snow to strand these two together? I'm hoping so. Buffy better not even make it down the road.
Author's Response: Welcome u2fan2005! I'm so glad you've stopped by to read and review! *giggle* Buffy is a determined woman, but her determination might not be enough!
Date: 01/08/2011 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
Very Sad..
Bad to travel on a wintery night..
Author's Response: Sorry to make you sad, Pam. Hopefully, with each chapter, I'll make you happier!
Date: 01/08/2011 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
Good. chapter. It is amazing how little words are necessary when ending a marriage. Great job conveying their feelings. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks Bridget! Yeah, it's amazing after all is said and done, such little words can end something so, at one point in time, big.