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Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2011 - 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

This was a great chapter BBE. Things really got bad there for our couple. And you're right...you didn't have to go into great detail about Buffy and Angel..we all know what happened :( Poor Buffy,now we can understand her better. I'm glad she realized that Will needed support too, and is going to talk to him.

Looking forward to the next chappies, even tho it's gonna be hard. *girds loins*

Loving this so much. :) Plz post soon...I'm on pins and needles.

L

Author's Response: Thanks so much, AMI! I'm glad the readers can understand her better. She wasn't the only one that had a difficult past. I'll try not to keep you on pins and needles too long. Thanks so much again for continuing to read and review my story!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2011 - 04:54 am Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

So very tragic that past with Angel. Really makes her more powerful, and more well matched with Spike. They share such tragic pasts, and were able once upon a time to make each other stronger. Perhaps they will be able to put back the pieces, become whole people again. Whether that lets them reunite as a couple or just as people again. Seeing the whole picture of who people are only helps to explain why they've ended up where they are. A truly thought provoking chapter. Update soon.

Author's Response: Exactly BR! I feel the same. They are perfectly matched, but just have forgotten all that had brought them together and made them stronger. I agree also seeing someone fully makes you understand them better. That is why I included their pasts. Thanks so much for your thoughtful and insightful review.

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2011 - 04:10 am Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

I'm glad they're going to talk, I'm wondering if maybe Angel did something to Dawn? Liked the foreshadowing with Buffy knowing stalking law.

Author's Response: Yes, the "talk" will be coming. And no, Angel didn't do anything to Dawn. Angel won't be making anymore cameos in this story. As always, thanks for your review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2011 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

Buffy didn't have it easy - her past must have influenced her a lot.
Hopefully talking will be a step in the right direction, back together. *sigh* Definitely not easy.

Author's Response: Yes, as for everyone, our pasts influences us. How much is up to the person. No, this won't be easy. Thanks so much for reviewing, it means a lot to me

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2011 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

Will and Buffy.. sure have a tremultuous relationship at this point. Thoughts of love and lust turn quickly into "negative" feelings and words that seem to be moving into contempt and hate. Although Buffy at times thinks it is the voice of reason.
I don't think Buffy is ready to stop the divorce proceedings for some reason. But trying to comfort William/Spike might not be enough. I think he would rather be alone than receive pity from his wife.
Time will tell .. see how the story unfolds. Been quite a negative ride at this junction for them. You kind of have to push back and take a deep breath after involving yourself in their delimma.. a "bow" to your writing.. nothing bad.. in that statement. But it does draw tears and pause.. and the need for a cleansing breath.
enjoying..
The thing with Angel was not that bad..

Author's Response: Yes, Pam, I've put a lot of my own feelings, experiences, and thoughts into each chapter. I'm not saying I've experience each thing that has happened to our characters, but there are bits and pieces of my own life threaded throughout. This story has been catharic to me. Will and Buffy have been through a lot. But in saying this, not all of it has been negative. Hopefully, this will be what they are able to remember.

Reviewer: amayuscula Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2011 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

I liked the chapter. I would like to read more so please update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: thanks amayuscula. My plans are to update soon. Hopefully my muse will comply!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2011 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

I figured her relationship with Angel wasn't rainbows and butterflies given the fact Buffy memorized California stalking laws. Looking forward to the next couple of chapters, and find out about the root of their troubles.

Author's Response: Yeah, I've been dropping hints about numerous things in previous chapters. Glad you were able to pick this one up. The next chapter will be coming soon. Thanks for you continuing with this story and reviewing. This means a lot!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2011 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 13: Little Reminders

Loving the background of this story! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks Photo! More will be coming soon!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2011 - 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 13: Little Reminders

How did they go so wrong? i can't wait to find out. I have my suspicions. I also can't wait to see them really talk get to the Catharsis part. I look forward to every update and am really enjoying this story. :-)

Author's Response: I promise that question will be answered soon. I *blush* you're looking forward to each update, demona! More will be coming soon.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2011 - 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 13: Little Reminders

Still with you! You know this chapter brought back so many memories for me.
I was married, the first time, very young, just a teenager really. My first husband was so young and in the Army. Gosh, we were broke that first year or so. It's funny, seems like sometimes the lack of money makes your life so much simpler.

Lovely chapter,
spuf

Author's Response: I'm glad that you are spufette! I'm flattered this chapter envoked memories for you. Ironically, I was married at 20, to my husband who was in the Army. I remember being so broke! I don't think it was the lack of money that made life simpler, I think it was seeing the world with new eyes. Even when everything was hard, it was still new. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2011 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter 13: Little Reminders

Love that moment and the freak out over a $10 bottle of champagne. And how simply a box of mac and cheese brought about memories that will hopefully set these two back on track. One can only hope. Lovely chapter. Update soon!

Author's Response: When you're broke, 10 bucks is a lot!! LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. More will be coming soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2011 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter 13: Little Reminders

So Buffy remembered again. Awe, cute about the candles.
Cute in a way too that Buffy wanted them not to loose that - the Buffy and Spike. And they did it anyway. But out of other reasons.
The noodles do indeed have their meaning. Enjoyed.

Author's Response: Thanks cordy. Buffy wanted, despite the changes in their lives, to remain who they always were. Money and fame can change people, and she was afraid of that.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2011 - 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 13: Little Reminders

This was such a good chapter. I just love going into their past to when they were happy. :) And they sure were. I loved the mac'n cheese reminder. :) And Spike still had some in his cupboard. Aww..

Now to see what happens when she apologizes. Hope it goes well. *fingers crossed*

More soon plz. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Ami. I wanted to show how even something mundane can have great meaning behind it. I'm glad it worked. More will be coming soon!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2011 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter 13: Little Reminders

Great chapter, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Anna! More will be coming soon. Thanks for reading, enjoying, and reviewing!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2011 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter 13: Little Reminders

Happy and Sad.like the backstory. and hopefully Spike will not put foot in mouth and turn her apology into an arguement.
enjoyed..

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the backstory. I feel that it was important for everyone to know our characters' past. Thanks so much for reading, enjoying, and reviewing, Pam

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2011 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter 12: His Muse

I'm still here, and I loved this chapter too. :)

I liked the flashback of their relationship when they were so happy and in love. Oh I hope they can get that back, and that Spike gets his muse back too. :)

Congrats on your wins at SunnyD...you and this story totally deserve it. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you are, AMI!! I really enjoying writing them happy and in love. After all this awkwardness it was a nice change. Thank ever so much for your congrats! And even more so that you believe that I and this story deserved them. Big hugs!!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2011 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 12: His Muse

Maybe this is why their marriage fell apart! Or maybe a small part of why! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Ummm...could be... More will be coming soon!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2011 - 07:19 am Title: Chapter 12: His Muse

Love seeing them when they were happy. What it was like. How truly far they've fallen. Gives them all the more reason to try one more time for redemption. At least from where I stand. Something will strike his muse. One of these days. Pretty cool. Update soon!

Author's Response: I loved writing them this way. Sexy and Sweet was a nice change! Thanks for your review. I plan on updating soon!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2011 - 04:26 am Title: Chapter 12: His Muse

Oh, great chapter! I loved it. Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: No, thank you IT for reading, reviewing, and enjoying!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2011 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 12: His Muse

Ah that's were the banner is from, this Halloween Night - I wondered.
With everything (aka Buffy) gone, no wonder that William's muse is MIA.
Enjoyed :)

Author's Response: Thanks, cordy. Yeah, had an idea for a banner and the wonderful, talented capella made this for me. I love it sooooo much!!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2011 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 12: His Muse

It's one of my favorites aswell. Simply because it kinda started and ended perfectly - sorry I can't describe better what I think :( But I hope you know what I mean :) It had everything, sweetness, sadness, mystery and, well, everything in the right portion and at the right places. The end with a cgarette was perfect.
Can't wait till you update again... I know.. I was late with reading... very late. Love ya, babe! :)
Oh! And once again, congratz! You deserve it!

Author's Response: You've described it perfectly, K!!! I'm planning to update soon. Oh, and it doesn't when you come back to the party, just as long as you came!!!! Thanks so much for the congrats. Love ya right back!!! Big hugs!!!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2011 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 11: Stubborness

wooohoo!! The batery's dead! :D
Loved the continuation of What do you mean, what do I mean...'s they've made LOL
Hahah...they are both so stubborn. Love their characterisation, babe!
They are made for eachother :)

Author's Response: I had fun writing that part! That was taken directly from a fight with the hubby. At the time it wasn't funny, but looking back it was hilarious!!! They are made for each other, that's what makes all of this even more frustrating!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2011 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 10: Uncertainty Fraught with Confusion

Oh dear... Arguing is good, though... If they argue, the past things might come up and they could finally let it all out for the other one to hear.
Beautifully written as always, babe! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, love! Arguing, in mind, shows that they at least still care. When you don't care about someone, you show them indifference and usually you don't respond to them at all.

Author's Response: I meant "in my mind", not just "in mind"

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2011 - 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 9: A New Perspective

I am baaack :)
This chapter was true to the series aswell, with all the stalking and time bringing them together... I love the way you use the words. Everything is descriptive enough, felt enough... and the story is interesting, very much so. Love, love, love it...
now...for the good part.. Due to my lateness... I have a few more chapters to read, don't I? ;)
off I go then :D

Author's Response: *jumping around* Welcome back, my love!!! I'm so glad you "love, love, love it!" Yup, you have a few more. I hope you enjoy them as well.

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2011 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 12: His Muse

Great chapter! I loved their costumes. You keep teasing us with snippets of their past without divulging the biggest secrets, it's not fair. :) Can't wait to see the whole story.

Author's Response: Thanks, anna! Ya, I'm a big tease! But, I PROMISE all will be revealed. I hope when it is, all this build up will make sense. *crossing fingers*

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