Date: 03/14/2016 - 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh... interesting start. Love the pictures you're painting with the descriptive language and the brief glimpse of the characterisation you've given so far. I have a good feeling that this promises to be well written. Onwards into the plot I go...
Author's Response: You are so sweet.
Date: 01/09/2012 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter 1
wow. this is so good! I can't believe i found it! I had no idea you had other works on SR that you didn't have on EF! OMG I cannot wait to read this WHOLE thing!!! I'm already addicted. I just love your writing :)
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie!
Date: 08/24/2011 - 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1
This was the perfect ending for this story. It couldn't have been happy since it didn't get happy for a very long time. At least they got a little happiness together before real life reared it's ugly head again. Hopefully their next life will work out better and at least they'll be together. Amazing story!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad the ending didn't feel incongruous. I was going for that Whedonesque thing where it all seems like it'll be fine only to be cruelly ripped away. They were only married for three days before she died.
Date: 03/11/2011 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1
You had me on the edge of my chair that entire last chapter. And the whole moving forward by a year? Excellent! It really added to the mood of the story. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/21/2011 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha...pittsburgh setting...u from there? I am. From the South Hills.
Author's Response: I was and hope to be again. I lived in Mount Lebanon for awhile and worked at the South Hills Village! Let me know if I get the feel of the city right. Also,did you see "Innocent Blood," the Pittsburgh vampire movie? Vampire Don Rickles!
Date: 02/09/2011 - 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely descriptive start. And a beautiful introduction to Buffy. And bonus points for choosing Pittsburgh.
Author's Response: I love Pittsburgh, it always feels like home. Glad you liked the introduction to Buffy and thanks for the comment!
Date: 01/31/2011 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like the way you're combining canon and the wishverse in this story, as well as the other little twists (human Angel, Spike and Tara as siblings). And as with all your stories, this is well-written and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love pairing Tara and Spike in stories because I think the actors had wonderful chemistry together.
Author's Response: Also, what's the wishverse?
Date: 01/20/2011 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting set up. Love the descriptions and explanations, I find they help set the scene for the story. Enjoying
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/19/2011 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start! I love the atmosphere that you have set up with this story, it's kind of noirish.
Author's Response: Cool! That's what I was going for, glad you like it.