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Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter 21

go buffy - LOVED her last paragraph/statement!

and i'm glad we're seeing xander again, and not in a negative way. i always thought xander was smarter than he was ever given credit.

looking forward to more of this entrancing story!

Author's Response: I thought that last thing was pretty good myself, not to toot my own horn or anything. ;) I'm definitely trying to bring Xander back into the story. More soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 21

Awe...my heart is breaking for them. They are both so stubborn, strong, and sensitive at the same time. So much love to give but so afraid to let it go. Please update soon. Lovely chapter and a great addition to the stories on here. I am surprised it is your first Spuffy fic by the way. Very good. Better than good!!

Author's Response: I feel for them too! I spent a lot of time lurking around on this site, so I've read a ton of fics and learned what's good and what's not. It took a lot for me to post this, but I'm glad I did! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 21

I think that it is a good thing that you update nearly everyday since otherwise my constant checking for updates would make me look like a loser. I will begin checking again in approximately nine hours (just is case).;)

Author's Response: Best bet for an update is sometime between the hours of 12AM and 2AM EST...I'm a bit of a night owl. I'm flattered you stalk the sight for my story! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 21

I hope they'll be able to repair their relationship. I'm glad Will's to stubborn to give up on Buffy, and Willow's giving her hope.

Author's Response: All in due time! Thanks for the review, more soon!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 21

-How are you always so positive?
-I read too much fanfiction
LOL spot on :)
Buffy's feelings are understandable and I do understand where's Will comming from too. It's not an easy situation at all, some people can work it, some just can't, or not right now at least.
Loved the update.can't wait to read some more.

Author's Response: I'm sure most of us on the sight can identify with that, so I'm glad you thought it was funny! That time in your life is always very confusing, so everyone's feelings are justified. More to come soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 06:09 am Title: Chapter 21

“How are you always so positive?” Buffy had asked, shaking her head.

“I read too much fan fiction,” Willow had said with a silly grin.

Ain't that the truth. Love their little battle. Of course they couldn't possibly stay away from each other. Gravity drags them together. Amazing. Update soon.

Author's Response: Definitely the truth!! I always love Buffy and Spike bickering games so I had to include that, wouldn't be them without it! Thanks for the review! More soon!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 06:07 am Title: Chapter 21

Xander's right, Will is just cluless.
I love Willow, if you truly want something, you can make it work.

Author's Response: Everyone's a little bit clueless at that age, even people who seem sure of themselves. I also love Willow, someone needs to give Buffy some positive reinforcement! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 05:56 am Title: Chapter 21

I would have liked to hear more of what Xander had been saying to her. I liked his reemergence in the story and his assessment that Will doesn't know what he wants. That seemed to cut close to their disagreement. I really want to learn what was at the heart of that relationship collapsing.

Author's Response: Xander will definitely have more to say about all that, I just don't want it revealed before I feel he's ready for it. He has a lot of things to overcome before he can be completely honest with Buffy, or himself for that matter. All in due time! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 05:53 am Title: Chapter 21

Your characterizations in this fic are absolutely wonderful!! Not just Buffy and Spike either; Xander and Joyce are great too :) And as much as I hate the suspense, you do a great job of developing each character along with the story.
Really enjoyed the update and looking forward to more soon!

Author's Response: I feel like often times secondary characters tend to get brushed to the side, and I really dislike that. So, I made it a point to have them play important roles. I'm glad you're enjoying the story! More to come soon, thanks for reviewing!

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