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Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2011 - 06:18 am Title: Elusive Butterfly

Oh man this story is hard to read. Poor Buffy is the only one who can try to figure out what's going on cause Spike is not really Spike and can't help her. :( I guess Spike is in Purgatory...and it seems that he was never turned and that's where the timeline got messed up. Now who could do something like this??? I smell a big, nasty RAT!
First the spiders, and now flying werewolves...Eeep!! This is bad.
The blue butterfly was a nice thing in this chappie...it felt like Spike communicating with Buffy. :)

Love this, even though it's angsty and so sad. *hugs*

Author's Response: Oh, AMI ... the hard part to read (for me) hasn't even started yet! Wait 'til you see what Spike goes through! And you would be right ...it was a big, nasty RAT! Glad you liked the blue butterfly 'helping' Buffy figure it out ... we'll get back to actual Spike soon. Keep those tissues handy ... {{hugs}} -P4S 2011.05.05

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2011 - 09:08 pm Title: Elusive Butterfly

Very interesting, the starting point seems to be that William never was turn, did he marry Cecily? and does that mean that Spike is trapped in purgatory sinc he wasn't created? A lot of questiens about how and why but interesting indeed.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! Oh, you've been talking to my muse, apparently! Very good! Will have more soon and you can see how spot on you are ... Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in here! I love hearing from you .. .even if you do give my plot away!! :-) {hugs} -P4S 2011.05.04

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2011 - 04:14 am Title: Elusive Butterfly

Sounds like a hell dimension where Spike and Buffy are being thrown into. Like the movie the butterfly effect, it seems that Buffy is living out the consequences of a world without Spike in it...how terrible! Enjoyed reading the very vivid details of this chapter. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi Vette - you are very intuitive ... you've always been able to to suss out where my muse was going before he got there! The 'butterfly effect' will be very apt later! Thanks for reading, will have more soon!! Love hearing from you! -P4S 2011.05.04

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2011 - 03:56 am Title: Elusive Butterfly

The angst hasn't started yet!? Dear lord, I must brace myself for this story. So much drama, I hope they can find a way to get back to before. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi Buffyrat! Well, I guess it might've started, but it isn't anywhere near the height of the angst to come! Thanks so much for reading! Will have more soon! -P4S 2011.05.04

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