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Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2011 - 05:56 am Title: Hero

OMG Dawn was so great in this chapter. Hopefully she's right and Buffy waking up will heal her. I loved the escape from the hospital and Andrew was funny..loved the snark.

God poor Spike, I can't stand what he's going thru. He's so broken and in pain. I dread to think what'll happen to him if Buffy leaves and he's all alone. :(

Hopefully when Buffy wakes up her and Dawn will start figuring things out and working on a plan.

Can't wait for your next post. :) *hugs* Love this...angst and all.

Author's Response: Hi AMI You can't beat Andrew for adding a little levity to a chapter ... he's such a trip!

Spike will be even more broken as the story goes on ... oh, it just kills me to see him like that! arrrgh! My muse is so mean! He just loves to toture them!

Hope RL gives you a break so you can see what Dawn finds out ... and shed a few tears for Spike while you're at it ... the next chapter is posted.

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in ... I hope the plot will keep you enthralled despite the high angst factor! {{hugs}} -P4S 2011.05.12

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 - 06:21 am Title: Hero

An angsty chapter with som small sweet moments. Now can Buffy wake up, she has to leave the limbo to do anything and it makes sense that she will heal better, but she will probably be in a lot of pain. Using Andrew was a good way to lighten the mode in the story a bit,

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! Andrew always is a good one to lighten the mood! LOL! He's such a trip! Now we'll find out if Dawn was right and what she can do to help Buffy ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! I love hearing from ya! -P4S 2011.05.12

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 - 04:56 am Title: Hero

Gotta say Dawn's theory makes about as much sense as any in this crazy world. Only time will tell, and it would seem as if she didn't take action, there was only one way it would go. Way to go Dawn for taking a chance. Love Buffy bolstering her confidence, even if that wasn't her intention. Great chapter. Hope they can all pull through. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hi Buffyrat! Dawn's turning out to be quite the hero! We'll see if her theory was right and if she can and will help Buffy fix things... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! I love hearing from you! -P4S 2011.05.12

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