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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2011 - 03:48 am Title: Bridge Over Troubled Water

Glad they got some happy time to regroup. Now, she can go into the battle full tilt. And hopefully find her way out of the winery to the amulet. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hi Buffyrat! There's another chapter up - you can see if they find the amulet... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in - I love hearing from you! -P4S 2011.05.23

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 - 12:13 pm Title: Bridge Over Troubled Water

I loved this chapter! It's so nice to have this little bit of peace and love between them...they love each other so much and you write that beautifully...not to mention the amazing sex as always. :)

My heart was breaking for Buffy when she broke down in the middle...she has so much on her plate and misses her kids and Spike and everyone so much.At least Spike was there this time for her. I know this won't last long, but it was a great interlude.

I have no idea what you have planned for this , but I beg you to have a very painful end to skank ho Hallie...that bitca deserves every bit of pain and torture for what she's putting our Spuffy through. I'm very bloodthirsty today.;D

Loved this chappie...will read more later. :) *squishes*

Author's Response: Hi AMI! Oh, I know ... poor Buffy, she's trying so hard to stay positive and keep the worry away for Spike's sake and it just snuck up on her. It was really nice that she had him there for comfort this time, though.

Hallie's end may not be painful enough for you ... but she will have two ends, if that is any consolation ... (huh? You'll see!)

Glad you enjoyed the short respite from the angst ... it hasn't gone far, don't get too comfortable!

Thanks so much for reading - Love hearing from you! {{{HUGS}}} -p4s 2011.05.22

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 - 03:25 am Title: Bridge Over Troubled Water

Another great chapter. I love Buffy and Spike. I am happy that your muse extended their time together.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget! Yeah, I was glad he decided to give them a little more happy time before getting back to the plot and the angst. Glad you enjoyed it too!! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! -P4S 2011.05.22

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2011 - 01:16 pm Title: Bridge Over Troubled Water

They really needed a good time between the angst. Back to the reallity then, just hope that Dawn didn't have to see Buffys body react to what she and Spike did :) We have to hope that Buffy didn't get pregnant, that would complicate things :)

Author's Response: Oh man, Magnus! Pregnant!? Let's hope not ... although, you never know! I think we were all ready for a little break from the angst! It won't last long, though. We can hope that Dawn drank enough wine to sleep through Buffy's reaction to Spike ... LOL! Let's hope, anyway!

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! {{hugs}} -P4S 2011.05.22

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2011 - 05:21 am Title: Bridge Over Troubled Water

Hope that this moment lost in time is not the calm before the storm. So glad that they got to some peace, love and laughter to help them endure for what is to come. They seem to have butterflies symbolize their souls as soul mates (am I off the mark…hope not). Their children in this reality were never born, do their souls also have butterflies that could help them cope with the loss of not being able to love and hold them? Paradise may be able to reunite all their spiritual souls together to nurture and fortify what is at stake, with any luck, Dawn can make a wish and force Hallie to make an appearance and wish for things to go back as they were only with her in it this time. Dawn needs a reward too. Maybe the magic from the scythe can achieve and improve on the life they left behind. I’m listening to the song “Mad World” sung by Gary Jules as I read every chapter of your story; somehow it seems to fit this segment of the universe. Loved how their souls touched as if pledging themselves to each other beyond their physical bodies. Again, look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Hi Vette - you are exactly right - the butterflies are their souls ... or the symbols of their souls, at least. It's gonna get complicated with the children in a bit, so I don't think their souls will be here to give any aid or comfort. The idea of making their own (Buffy and/or Dawn) wish will be explored later, too ... I don't think I know that song, I'll check it out - it sounds fitting!

Will have more I think Sunday at the latest. Trying not to get too far ahead of my beta, the next chapter is done, but not sure when the one after that will be done ... so I'm trying to space them out a bit (it's not easy for me to do! I just want to post, but it's probably better to space it out a litlle!).

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! I love hearing from you - always insightful reviews! -P4S 2011.05.21

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