I am glad she killed Hallie. Somehow I don't think that is the last of her. If it is I say good riddance. I understand why Dawn is upset but she should not have left her. I hope we will be out of this universe soon. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget! I thought most people would approve of Buffy killing Hallie ... I was worried that people wouldn't think that Dawn would leaver her, so I'm glad that worked for you! My muse originally wanted to kill Dawn, but I thought Buffy had enough angst and guilt without that, so I talked him out of it! We still have a ways to go in the 'wish-world', more angst, more vengance to come. Hang in there! I promise a light at the end of the tunnel ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! Love hearing from you! -P4S 2011.06.02

Go Buffy! All the pain, misery and torment she went through only to find out that Hallie is twisted through and through to have an incestuous fling with her descendent. It only goes to show just how far Hallie was willing to go to hurt Buffy. Killing Hallie was a shallow consolation considering that it did not reverse the wish she made. Too bad that her death did not have that clause woven into it. Angel as always seemed more pre-occupied with getting into Buffy’s pants than helping her. D’Hoffryn didn’t seem too concerned over Buffy’s threat; he was too busy trying to bring Dawn over to the dark side of his vengeance cult. Considering how Buffy killed Hallie that would qualify her as a potential candidate to become a vengeance demon. What better way to carry out her plan than to become one of them in this reality. D’Hoffryn may not want to bring her into the fold, but she could demand to be brought in as part of their “policy” on recruiting. Dawn does not understand how Buffy could have taken a life because she is idealistic enough to believe that the world is black and white with no grey areas. Love how unexpected the shot was on Hallie, she obviously under-estimated Buffy and never factored into her revenge scenario that she could lose in any way shape or form for all the wrong’s she committed. Now, Buffy is truly alone, all she has is herself to see her mission through. It is always about the mission for slayers and Buffy’s has her whole family and friends on the line. Your muse made Hallie’s death too merciful and quick. *Slaps his bottom for being so cheeky*

Author's Response: Heya Vette! I knew you'd be happy with Hallie's demise ... despite it being not long and painful enough! You know, I hadn't thought about Buffy joining D'hoffryn ... oh, that would've been a good twist ... quite ironic ... although not sure he would've offered after the threatening.

I'm glad you thought Dawn's reaction was in character ... I was worried about that a bit. My cheeky muse originally wanted to kill Dawn (in order to leave Buffy totally alone), but I thought we had enough angst and Buffy had enough guilt without that, so I talked him out of it. We'll see where the names Hallie gave her lead ... and what other surprises are in store soon.

My muse says 'whip it ...whip it good!' heehee! He's definately a cheeky one! Evil and cheeky!

Thanks so much for reading and your wonderful, insightful reviews! Love them! -p4s 2011.06.02

wow, that was intense

Author's Response: Hi Spuffy6! Thank you ... more intenisity to come ... -p4s 2011.06.02