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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2011 - 03:42 am Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p2

Well, it must not be over yet. Revenge seems so easy in theory, not so much in the real world. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Your wish is my command ... update posted. Yeah, revenge is easy to think about ... not always so easy to do. Where will Buffy's heart lead her next? Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.09

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2011 - 08:52 am Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p2

This have somehow felt like a test for her love, to see if she was willing to give up her happines for Williams. All this talk about "God works in mysteries ways" add to that feeling (God could be very cruel in the old testament). She could talk to Wanda I suppose and mayby get a gift from God for passing the test. I just have to wait and see what you make of this.

Author's Response: God definately has a warpped sense of humor sometimes ... and yeah, can be quite cruel. We'll see where Buffy's heart leads her next ... Will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and sticking with my devil-muse! I always love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.08

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2011 - 04:20 am Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p2

Turn on the water-works and order up a truckload of ice-cream as comfort food. I swear that happiness may be stolen through a spiteful wish the way things are playing out. I guess her promise to save the children if not Spike is out of sight and mind to Buffy, are the kids happy with mommy dearest? *Scratches head* Somehow, I do not see Cecily as the epitome of motherhood. William in his own way has only loved one woman so that is all he can gauge his feelings on. He is comparable to a pig that eats slop and wallows in muck not knowing the taste and comforts of better things, so he is ignorantly happy, uncaring and unaware of the finer things. Oink, Oink Cecily! Now William can be called a pig but not in the way Buffy meant it toward Spike. So, Buffy is playing out some harlequin romance ideal of “if you love something let it go, if it was meant to be, it will come back to you.” Their soul-mate destiny is being tested to the limits, guess Angel may get another crack at filling in the soul-mate position after all the way your muse is headed. Picks up chains to tie up your muse to reel him back to Spuffy through “tickle torture”. *Grins Evilly*

Author's Response: LOL! Tickle torture may be the only thing that could reel my evil muse in! heehee! You have no idea how prophetic your observations are about William only knowing one kind of 'love' ... that will come into play very soon! I totally love your reviews, Vette! So funny, even though I'm not sure you mean it that way! :O My muse, however, is not evil enough to send Buffy back to Angel ... he takes exception to that remark! :) Will have more soon ... we are getting very close to turning a corner - the question is, what's around the corner? {{hugs}} -p4s 2011.06.08

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2011 - 01:26 am Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p2

and it keeps twisting! now that rack has stolen what wasn't stolen by hallie, now what?

sniff. buffy's final speech to william - heartbreaking!

looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hi rkm! Poor Buffy ... she just can't seem to catch a break at all! We'll see where her heart leads he next ... the ride isn't over yet! Hang on! Will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.08

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2011 - 11:50 pm Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p2

Nice scene between Buffy and William but it does not seem she is any closer to getting her family back.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget ... you never know what will make the difference ... hang in there! -p4s 2011.06.08

Reviewer: Inwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2011 - 10:20 pm Title: Billy, Don't Be a Hero p2

I think i just died a little inside...and now i have to go and splash some cold water on my face because I just shed some tears for these two lovers. I am so sad right now....excuse me while I go wallow in a corner.

Author's Response: Hi Inwen ... Oh, you know, that's so sweet. There really isn't any higher compliment than knowing the story is touching other people's hearts as much as it does mine. Sorry that you died a little inside ... didn't really mean to cut that deep, but that's such a wonderful thing for you to say. Wallow all you want but save some tears for the next chapter ... or two ... or three. {{Eeeek!}} Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Hang in there! God (and my muse) work in mysterious ways! -p4s 2011.06.07

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