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Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2011 - 10:42 am Title: Just One Last Dance

one shining moment for william - and then his misunderstanding of all the circumstances brings him more hurt. and buffy - for one moment she was able to feel something, and it was beautiful. and then like with everything it seems for her recently, it's turned into more heartache ... and now she's back to her suicidal thoughts ... i've just about given up on her finding a semblance of peace (without going the suicide route) ...

Author's Response: Hi rkm! They both touched a place deep within the other ... but it was fleeting and perhaps more painful for William than never knowing that place at all. Everywhere Buffy turns she runs into landmines ... and now what will William do? Can he really go back home to Cecily after this? We'll find out over the next few chapters what happened after William left her there ... and what consequences her actions had on the future...

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 - 06:50 pm Title: Just One Last Dance

It was nice how she woke the Spike part in William and he woke the Buffy part in her again. But that ruined him, he can't go back to his old life now. It was so sad to see Buffy in the end, once again things seems to become worse. This will change the future but what and how much? I can think on many ways the future could change, but I will have to wait and see what you will write.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! Very true ... they each touched that part of the other that only a soulmate could reach ... but she can't stay. Where will William turn? He can't go back to Cecily, can't go forward with his angel ...

We'll find out over the next few chapters what Buffy changed by coming here and what consequences her actions had. Thanks so much for reading and your reviews! I always love hearing from you, Magnus! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 - 05:51 am Title: Just One Last Dance

It is better to have love and lost than never to have loved at all! William probably does not agree with that sentiment at the moment. Such metamorphoses in William having sampled true love only to have it slip through his fingers. Now he knows the loss Buffy was feeling and OMG! What vulgarian’s doing the “deed” out in public! Get a room or a bush people! Anyhow, hope that your muse got a kick out of making “sex angels” in the snow to delight his twisted tastes. Makes a snowball and tosses it to your muse’s head for the added angst!

Author's Response: ROFL! You know my muse is not only evil, but an exhibitionist , too ... haven't you figured that out yet!?? heehee! Oooo 'sex snow angels' ... hmmmmm ... that gives me an idea ... I can see a light bulb coming on in my blue-eyed-muse's evil brain! :O

Now what can William do? He can't go forward with Buffy ... surely can't go back to Cecily ... where will he turn? We'll find out over the next few chapters what happened when he left her and what Buffy changed in the future by coming back to the past... {{hugs}} I so love your reviews! I honestly was laughing so hard at the sex angels thing...LOL!! Too funny! Love it! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: Spuffy6 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 - 03:20 am Title: Just One Last Dance

ok, u got me. i used to kinda know where the story was going most of the time, or at least figure out how some of the problems would be solved. but now, i have no idea where you are going with this. how can u possibly fix this mess? im hooked, have been for a long time, and now i just cant wait for the next chapter. everytime i see an update i get excited and think its all gonna make sense now, and im still waiting. ive said it before, but u are an amazing writer to keep such interest going in your story. keep it coming! :)

Author's Response: Hi Spuffy6! I'm so glad you're excited for the next chapter! It may take the next two or three ... maybe more, to answer all the questions and get everything to make sense. We're about to turn a corner ... the question is, what's waiting around the bend? Next chapter is up ... enjoy! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 - 01:59 am Title: Just One Last Dance

That was sweet and bone crushing in one fell swoop. Indeed, what will happen when she gets back to her time, if Rack brings her back. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Everywhere Buffy turns she steps on a landmine ... will she get caught in Rack's magic or has she, indeed, stepped on a butterfly and changed the future? We'll soon find out.. thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2011 - 08:08 pm Title: Just One Last Dance

I really don't know what to say about this chapter. I guess I was happy and sad at the same time. I know how Buffy felt but I would be curious to know William's thoughts when he arrived home. I understand why he became upset but he knew she was from a different time.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget ... Yes, his mind knew, but his heart couldn't stop itself ... it just falls, heedless of reason. He can't go forward with Buffy ... can he really go back to Cecily now that he knows what's possible? We'll find out over the next few chapters what happened and what Buffy's actions did to the future... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2011 - 06:29 pm Title: Just One Last Dance

How sad! I understand what Buffy was trying to do and yet I completely understand why William would react that way. Jeeze...what is the solution to this anyway? I'm eager to see where you take us.

Author's Response: Hi Sibb! Buffy was trying so hard to open William's eyes to the possiblities of love ... and you know him - his heart just falls so wholly.... he can't go back and he can't go forward with her --- where can he go now? We'll find out over the next few chapters ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.11

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2011 - 05:56 pm Title: Just One Last Dance

Why do I think that Rack and William are connected.
Those poor souls so lost and sad trying to the right things and just having shit thrown at your face by a monkey.

Author's Response: Hi gopher101 ... Yeah, poor Buffy, every way she turns she steps on landmines ... No wonder she was ready to give up. Perhaps some small thing will make a difference and help her turn a corner ... just don't know what's around the corner... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! I love hearing from everyone! -p4s 2011.06.11

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