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Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2011 - 06:40 am Title: Acapella

Now this chapter I could read without a hole in my heart. The sketch of Buffy as Avengelyne and the comics are awesome! Glad you put them in, never knew about the comics, but they fit Buffy. Eyeball eggs, that is so neat, where did you get that? Can I tickle torture Spike Too? Sounds like a hoot being in on the "Spike Sandwich". Pinches your muse's cheek (not the face) lovinly for this chapter.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! Yay - FINALLY, a chapter that ended on a happy note! And you only had to read ...what is it ...20-something chapters to get to this one? I saw those comics and that was just so perfect ... a fallen angel trying to get her wings back ... in fact, God cast her out of heaven so she could become a hardened warrior to fight in the final armagedon on the side of good ... hmmmmm .... Buffy's become a hardened warrior over the last years ... hmmmm ...

Eyeball eggs is the invention of my own six year old mind ... I always thought poached eggs looked like eyeballs! LOL! Get in line for the Spike tickle torture! Me first! heehee! 'course, there's probably enough goodness there to go around ... I'll share! My muse just rubbed his tushy where you pinched him and ran his tongue across his lips ... I think he liked that! :O

Thanks so much for reading and you're always entertaining reviews! {{hugs}} -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: Catrine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2011 - 09:36 pm Title: Acapella

I knew it!!!:D I knew he would't kill his own children. Loved this chapter and the way it all came together. So sweet that hr looked for Avengelyne for such a long time and that he didn't want to tell Byffy because he didn't want her to feel like he was setleling (don't know if that is the way that word is written). I'm so thrilled there is another update. I will save it for tomorrow. It's nice to have something to look forward to ;)

Author's Response: Hi Catrine! There were a few of you who were very sure William/Spike wouldn't kill his own children ... kudos!! Glad you enjoyed the way everything played out for Spike after his encounter with his angel ... will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! Love hearing from U! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2011 - 12:21 pm Title: Acapella

Sorry I forget to mention, good work on finding the comics, that's where the name Avengelyne came from I guess.

Author's Response: HI Magnus ... Yep, that's where Rack got the name he called her ...a fallen angel.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2011 - 12:14 pm Title: Acapella

So He didn't kill them, I was wondering about that, Dru could have been with him at the time or something like that. Does this mean that we have a Spike or William lookalike like in the other timeline? This means that there is nothing more for Buffy to try to fix. Well mayby get 5 years of memories. Anyway something bad will happen, you more or less said so. I just have to wait and see.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus ... it definatley means that we could have some Spike/Buffy look-a-likes around the world ... Will have to keep an eye out for them !!! :D There will be some more angsty moments as she tries to fit back in, but nothing too catastrophic ... or that can't be fixed ... Thanks so much for reading, always love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2011 - 12:07 am Title: Acapella

i'm so glad that buffy told him everything about 'her' last five years. and i'm so heartbreakingly relieved that spike didn't kill his kids like the books said. he absolutely did the right thing ...

and such a sweet family moment - chokingly sweet. here's to hoping things get steadily better for our couple ...

SO looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hi rkm! There will be some ups and downs ... but things have definately turned a corner for them now... Glad you enjoyed the happy after all the angst ... I'm so glad Spike didn't kill his kids, too ... just giving them to Wanda and the vicar was heartbreaking enough for him... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2011 - 09:05 pm Title: Acapella

I like the "fix" on the three past children--thank you for that! But I still don't like having this life as the "real" life from here on out. But I'll try to be patient and see how it all works out.

Author's Response: Hi Sibb ... there will be some positives to this new life, so give it a chance to play out ... although there are definately some downsides too, some of which will be fodder for future stories... Glad you liked the 'fix' ... it was an easy one, although Spike was still heartbroken over what he had to do... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Will try to have more soon! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2011 - 08:02 pm Title: Acapella

So glad he pawned off the little ones on Wanda. A perfect solution indeed. Spike would've staked himself before he killed his children, though Cecily totally deserved it. Glad things are mostly back to normal, even if JJ may be a poltergeist. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Yes ... Wanda would be the perfect mother for them ... we'll hear from her again before the story is over ... I figured those of you who wanted Cecily dead would be happy that she was killed twice in this story ..heehee! Poor JJ ... hope he's not really a poltergeist! :D ... Will have more soon! Thanks so much!! -p4s 2011.06.18

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2011 - 07:58 pm Title: Acapella

Not you, Will.
Love the sweet fluff of this chapter.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the happy stuff ... it took a while to get to it ...the angst is 100% over yet, but it should be a bit less in depth and duration now ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.18

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