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Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2011 - 05:21 am Title: It’s a Small World

Heaven or Hell no one can tell whether Buffy or Spike will end up crazy or lost its a coin toss to your evil yet seductive muse. Your muse's Jekyl and Hyde ride has my head spinning, just when your readers start getting a happy with the Spuffy lovin'...Wham! Here comes the pain! So now that Spike's memories flooded back, did Buffy's from the past 5 years return too? I mean, I kinda miss reading about the twin babies and their wonderment at the world and their extended family. The mission for your muse should he decide to accept, is to spell out to us what happened to the victorian kids for Buffy to be at peace with their well-being. Looks toward your muse in anticipation unable to resist his most sinister attraction!

Author's Response: Heya Vette ... oh, my muse loves to keep you on your toes ... can't be too happy, can we? He loves to toss more pain and anguish into the pie just to spice it up!

No, Buffy didn't get the memories back from the 5 lost years ... and I'll do a true confessions and tell you why: 'Cos I don't do babies well! argh! and BB (my dear, blue boy muse) comes in and gets her preggers again! You cannot be serious! Actually, what this will do will allow me to fill in the blanks over time, so I don't have to think up everything all at once ... I will try to do that little by little so we don't completely miss everything that happened. Now, as for the Victorian kids ... there will be more info on them coming up *and* even more in future story arcs, so don't worry about that ... they will not be forgotten. I may even bring in some of their decendants at some point, BB hasn't really shared his plan on that with me yet.

"Sinister attraction" ooooooo .... that got a smirk out of him! heehee! Thanks so much!! {hugs} -p4s 2011.06.27

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2011 - 12:58 am Title: It’s a Small World

that was an interesting chapter - starts off with love, then morphs into a hell for spike and buffy, goes into a pergatory-like place, then for a few chosen moments there are compassion and realization, and then back to love. definitely quite a ride!

looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hi rkm! You're right ... it's definately a wild ride in a short time! Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! {{hugs}} -p4s 2011.06.27

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2011 - 01:47 pm Title: It’s a Small World

Of course, they were having good time, then they must have angst :). A strong chapter, Spike get all guilt and painful memories at once, then Buffy helping him with the pain and finaly getting forgivnes from the ghosts of past times. Very good indeed.

Author's Response: Well, of course there must be angst! Where have you been!? LOL! I don't think there is one chapter without *some* amount of angst in this whole story... OH - Maybe that one when they were in the Butterfly Garden, although I think even that had some angst in the middle - that was as close as it got. Glad you enjoyed him getting forgiveness from the ghosts ... now maybe he can move forward and feel more worthy of what he has... Thanks again for stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.27

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2011 - 04:37 am Title: It’s a Small World

Well that resolves a few things. Good to see him back on the mission, and back on the mission based on the opinions of some of the powers. A pretty good start in the right direction. And we will soon get to figure out what may or may not have happened with the help of the others. I do wonder if there are still vengence demons in this world now, or if they're still gone, cause I've got to wonder what Cecily could do this time around if left to it. Awesome. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Will have a few more things resloved in the next couple of chapters ... hopefully just about everything, other than the money situtation, which will be in a different story arc. There are still vengenace demons, but Cecily isn't among them ... as WtB killed her as a human in 1891 ... Will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! I love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.06.27

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