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Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2011 - 07:59 am Title: Wild Angels

The memories of hell that Spike has are terrible, can Buffy give him her memories of heaven to ease his torment? Anyway, the twins apparently can communicate telephathically, that might come in handy in the future. Can they share each other's physical sensations with an open bond? Some twins seem to have that uncanny ability to know when the other is hurt. Buffy's pregnancy seems to be one that will be unique of her other previous ones according to her feelings of well-being and lack of fear, could it be because human William impregnated her instead of turned Spike? It is fun to read about the twins and Annie, let's have more point's of view from them. Perhaps a special moment celebrated (twins official birthday) they can each look around them and give their account of how they perceive their lives and the roles they have within their family...does Annie feel like her special ability toward languages be used for future research? Will she learn demon languages as well as human? Will Billie be a watcher in training? He is bookish and a thinker, so maybe he can start accumulating his very own library in his room, not just human folklore but demon as well. Dani is through and through a little warrior princess, how she comforted her brother and assured him that the noises he over-heard were not anything but a game his parents played was adorable and quite telling of her verocious need to protect her sibling. Look forward to more, the name brain-storming is fun, already put in my two cents worth and will wait and see what you and your muse decide to use.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! Be careful what you wish for ... got lots more with the kids in the next story already ... I hope it doesn't turn out to be boring to everyone!! You'd tell me, right? Just say .. 'ok, enough of the kids!' LOL! I'll get it! Good question on the feeling physical sensations on the twins ... we'll have to find that out later. I'm glad Dani's coming across as the protector ... she definately is that. Billy ... hmmm, could be a Watcher in training, we'll have to see on that. And Annie will definately go into a field working with languages ... perhaps not demon to start with, that may come later. Maybe later I'll try a chapter strictly from the kid's POV ... Christmas maybe when everyone is there... unless you tell me before that to nix it! heehee! I've got a few chapters written on the next story, LOTS more interaction with the kids in there. Hopefully I can get them beta'd (and make sure I can get them out of the trouble they get in) and start posting soon. Thanks so much for all your wonderful name suggestions and your thoughtful and insightful reviews! I love them. My blue-eyed muse sends you a big, sloppy kiss!! {{hugs}} -p4s 7/15/11

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2011 - 01:08 pm Title: Wild Angels

More reconnection, good and we got to hear about Spikes time in hell, poor him.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! There were a lot of chapters at the end here with them reconnecting ... but I think it needed to all be done, so I hope it wasn't too much. I hope neither of them have to face that hell dimension again ... it sounded quite hellish! Thanks and {{hugs}} -p4s 2011.07.15

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