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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2011 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

I'm glad they worked things out (talked) regarding Max and other things.
Spike was very helpful / thoughtful regarding the other slayers (the fight).

Author's Response: Baby steps for our heroes. :-)

Reviewer: readergirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2011 - 12:47 am Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Just a quick note to let you know how much I'm enjoying the story, and how I devour each chapter as it's posted. Buffy cannot tell Spike why she wants him, because she hoped so hard that her actions would speak for her. She's brokenhearted, too, because she knows the message is not getting through because of the baggage they bring from the past. But OH, that last sonnet! I cannot wait to see where this particular incarnation of Buffy and Spike will go next!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for this quick note! I'm so thrilled that last poem had some impact. It fits him so well. Cheers. :-)

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2011 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Figured Spike would misunderstand Buffy's relationship with Max. Glad they talked it out more or less. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: The scene did lok a bit suspect, so we won't blame him for thinking he was being used yet again. Thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2011 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Great Job. I love the sonnets by W.S. The way you weaved these into this story shows how timeless and true they are, and made for a really well done and touching chapter.

It feels so appropriate for Spike to be able to express himself this way and so great that Buffy does not need a translation for #29.

I repeat - great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. :-)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2011 - 11:29 am Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Guess you caught me on a good day.
I know many authors berate and chastise their readers comments.. that its Buffy's story and not Spike's.
I am more Spikecentric and it saddens me when he is "in love with Buffy" and bears all to her.. feeling used, worthless, and in love for naught. So that is what hit me with the sonnets.
Glad that your Buffy made him realize that she had no intentions of using him for sex. And now to see where the story goes..

Author's Response: Wow. I'm so happy you guys comment at all, so you won't read me chastising anyone! I always thought that most fics were Spike-centric, and most readers too. I've actually been trying to remind people why Buffy was an inspirational hero in the first place, while also trying to show why Spike is so thoroughly deserving of being loved. In a way, I like to think that my Buffy is Joss' Buffy, but that he let too many other writers play with her while he was doing (the admittedly awesome) Firefly. Anyway, I think you'll be pleased by how I treat Spike in the end. ;-)

Reviewer: Rebcake Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Another fantastic chapter, sweetie! So packed with action, romance, little hints, and deeper mysteries. For instance, what is it about her desires that self-proclaimed woman-of-the-world Buffy Summers is afraid to face?

I suspect that Slod is going to be trouble, later...

Author's Response: I think part of Buffy's problem is that she doesn't know her own heart. She's action girl but she's not udnerstanding what her actions are showing, you know? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 - 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

That was beautiful! I love how you are unpeeling the layers of their relationship in this one. Oh--and the way you've made Angel look like an idiot isn't so bad either!

Author's Response: LOL Yeah, I'm trying to make their *reunion* as complicated as I think their feelings are. So glad you appreciate it. :-)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 - 11:35 am Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Oh, Spike .. A Man For All Seasons.. Fighting the girls and in the end willing to be beaten by the Slayerettes...
Suprised he did not kill the Slod..
And the Sonnets..
So maybe after Max and the conversation and the reality of her not using him.. with the Sonnets that made me cry BTW especially the last. Maybe they can be together at least for a while.

Author's Response: Did you really cry? Wow. I love that poem. So glad you did too. :-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 - 11:09 am Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Amazing chapter! It's hard to pick out which part--from the fight, to the de-tonguing of creepy demon, to being honest. I loved it all!

Author's Response: Woo hoo! I'm so surprised by the reaction to this chapter. Thanks so much. :-)

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