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Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2011 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Figured Spike would misunderstand Buffy's relationship with Max. Glad they talked it out more or less. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: The scene did lok a bit suspect, so we won't blame him for thinking he was being used yet again. Thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2011 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Great Job. I love the sonnets by W.S. The way you weaved these into this story shows how timeless and true they are, and made for a really well done and touching chapter.

It feels so appropriate for Spike to be able to express himself this way and so great that Buffy does not need a translation for #29.

I repeat - great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. :-)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2011 - 11:29 am Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Guess you caught me on a good day.
I know many authors berate and chastise their readers comments.. that its Buffy's story and not Spike's.
I am more Spikecentric and it saddens me when he is "in love with Buffy" and bears all to her.. feeling used, worthless, and in love for naught. So that is what hit me with the sonnets.
Glad that your Buffy made him realize that she had no intentions of using him for sex. And now to see where the story goes..

Author's Response: Wow. I'm so happy you guys comment at all, so you won't read me chastising anyone! I always thought that most fics were Spike-centric, and most readers too. I've actually been trying to remind people why Buffy was an inspirational hero in the first place, while also trying to show why Spike is so thoroughly deserving of being loved. In a way, I like to think that my Buffy is Joss' Buffy, but that he let too many other writers play with her while he was doing (the admittedly awesome) Firefly. Anyway, I think you'll be pleased by how I treat Spike in the end. ;-)

Reviewer: Rebcake Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Another fantastic chapter, sweetie! So packed with action, romance, little hints, and deeper mysteries. For instance, what is it about her desires that self-proclaimed woman-of-the-world Buffy Summers is afraid to face?

I suspect that Slod is going to be trouble, later...

Author's Response: I think part of Buffy's problem is that she doesn't know her own heart. She's action girl but she's not udnerstanding what her actions are showing, you know? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 - 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

That was beautiful! I love how you are unpeeling the layers of their relationship in this one. Oh--and the way you've made Angel look like an idiot isn't so bad either!

Author's Response: LOL Yeah, I'm trying to make their *reunion* as complicated as I think their feelings are. So glad you appreciate it. :-)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 - 11:35 am Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Oh, Spike .. A Man For All Seasons.. Fighting the girls and in the end willing to be beaten by the Slayerettes...
Suprised he did not kill the Slod..
And the Sonnets..
So maybe after Max and the conversation and the reality of her not using him.. with the Sonnets that made me cry BTW especially the last. Maybe they can be together at least for a while.

Author's Response: Did you really cry? Wow. I love that poem. So glad you did too. :-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 - 11:09 am Title: Chapter 21: Time for Something Different

Amazing chapter! It's hard to pick out which part--from the fight, to the de-tonguing of creepy demon, to being honest. I loved it all!

Author's Response: Woo hoo! I'm so surprised by the reaction to this chapter. Thanks so much. :-)

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2011 - 12:00 am Title: Chapter 20: Not this Time

Max was so rude to Buffy! Wonder what his problem is?? Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Just saw this review, and now you will have seen Chapter 21. I hope that explains things a little. Poor guy.

Reviewer: Madeline Black Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2011 - 11:00 am Title: Chapter 20: Not this Time

So far, so AMAZING! Love everything about this story. Cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: spufster Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2011 - 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: Times Change, but the Song Stays the Same

Ms Jane, you have done so well by the future fix category. Your sense of humor really shines through in Buffy, she remains the hero without being all speechifying Buffy. And your Spike. Oh lord, I love your Spike, I love his devotion without all the strings attached that all men seem to have with Buffy. This story is paced very well too, I don't hate your slayers either, they have distinct personalities needs and desires. I gotta say, I want to know more about Sonny and Buffy. Please do continue writing this great story, it deserves an ending befitting the fantastic 20 chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much Spufster for such a complete and thoughtful review. I'm so pleased you appreciate Buffy in this story. I will definitely be continuing the story for as long as I can do it justice. I hope that means to the end. :-)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2011 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter 20: Not this Time

Gina and Richard? Fun. :)
But I can't see Angelus being in love with Gina - she could to better than that, finding someone who loves her back. If she got the chance...
But uh-huh - what a timing Spike has.
Sounds as if some explanations are due, huh? Maybe.

Author's Response: You mean Angel and Sonny? :-) I think you're right though. I can't see him being in love with her either. Thanks for reviewing, as always!

Reviewer: lovesparklys Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2011 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 20: Not this Time

Love the story!!!! Since Angel, Buffy seems like a magnet for people to get their hearts broken. I think sometimes I rooted for her and Spike because he loved her so much instead of thinking she was a good person for him or anyone. I digress. Great Chapter!!!!! I loved Gina, understood Sonny a little more (reminds me of Buffy after Angel), felt for Max (he reminds me of Spike). You really draw me into this story and it is quite a gift to make people enter another world. Cheers.

Author's Response: Thank you! One of the things I hope to do in this story is to remind people why we loved Buffy in the first place. She had her really amazing moments in the series, but she was her ugliest with Spike. Break-ups are rarely so simple, and someone is always bound to get hurt. Hopefully Buffy won't look like such a bad guy in the end. Thanks so much for reviewing. :-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2011 - 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 20: Not this Time

Thanks for a lengthy update. Really enjoyed the characters interactions.

Author's Response: Thanks! :-)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2011 - 10:56 am Title: Chapter 20: Not this Time

X-love meets old X love. Guess Spike will read somthing into this and go on his merry way.. back to business?
enjoyed

Author's Response: Oh yee of little faith. Spike is forty years older, and while the reader and Buffy may make ungenerous assumptions about our hero, Spike and I have a new attitude about such things. You'll see. ;-)

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2011 - 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 19: Like Old Times

I just read this in one sitting, couldn't put it down. I like how you've blended everybody into a plotty (?) story, with a deft ear for new characters. This is just great!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! It's been fun writing the original characters. You know, I write and publish chapter by chapter, so I've never read the whole story in one sitting. The idea makes me nervous. I'm so glad you thought it read well. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2011 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 19: Like Old Times

Loved the update! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks. Hopefully, the next chapter won't take so long. ;-)

Reviewer: Inwen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2011 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 19: Like Old Times

Just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying your story. It's really awesome and original. I love what you've done with it so far...waiting eagerly for Spuffy love. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Original? That's so nice to hear. I was hoping to write something fresh. Thanks again for sharing your thoughts.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2011 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 19: Like Old Times

With the movie studio in the back, no one thinks twice about someone like Clem walking around. Oh that's right - and that's very clever.
Enjoyed the spuffyness.

Author's Response: Thanks. :-)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2011 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 19: Like Old Times

enjoyed..getting back together hopefully.. and at least Spike knows Angel is out..

Author's Response: Yeah, Angel is so out. It's been forty years for goodness sake. Enough of that!

Reviewer: SeaPea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2011 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 18: No Time Like the Present

This keeps getting better and better.

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you liked this chapter!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2011 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 18: No Time Like the Present

Awesome chapter! Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Matinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2011 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 18: No Time Like the Present

Am still enjoying this fic, and I'm also very intrigued to find out what you're planning to do with Gina, who seems to be an interesting character. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks Matinee. :-)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2011 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 18: No Time Like the Present

Ah Dawn gave Spike is 'present'. Like I thought he was very happy about it.
Mmmmh so Buffy is getting stronger? Then the power seems to go back to her.
Ah poor Xander, still after the Comptel 5 *gg*

And well, it's a start Spike said he'd stay as long as Buffy needs him. And she appreciates what Spike thinks...
Enjoyed the update :)

Author's Response: Thanks cordykitten. :-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2011 - 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 18: No Time Like the Present

Great chapter! Love the interactions between all the characters both major and minor. Very hot scene in the bar with Buffy. Looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lovesparklys Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2011 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 18: No Time Like the Present

Been checking for this everyday. Great chapter.... love the progression of the story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! By the way, I tend to update once a week, but this chapter was late. Tip: I think if you "favorite" the story, you get an email when it's updated.

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