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Reviewer: Puddinhead Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2012 - 11:47 am Title: Chapter 5

Your Spike voice is spot-on. Snarky, sexual with the just right touch of wit. I also like Buffy's inner monologue. Self-depreciating and wildly attracted to 'the bleached menace.'

Author's Response: I remember writing that scene; it was one of those that comes easier. Really awesome that it came across this way!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2011 - 05:37 am Title: Chapter 5

Captured the true nature of Angelus and his vile nature. The nightmare of experiencing the horror that William suffered through is enough to make her feel a different kind of pain than what her mother inflicted on her. Either way, her pain and William's mirror each other, betrayal and helplessness are never easy to live with much less overcome. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Glad you think so! It's kinda creepy how easy it is to come up with what would Angelus at his most evil do. Indeed it is a different kind of pain, they have both been traumatised at an early age which is something they have in common. Love that you find parallels between those events. Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :)

Reviewer: totalgeekgirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2011 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 5

eeek! okay i'd already worked out it was spike but the chapter still needs a geeky squeal of joy i can't wait till the next chapter your fiction is really well written and the characterisation is great btw totally loving shattered silence

Author's Response: Hee... it wasn't surprising for you then. I suspect most of you guys figured it out, or at least guessed. :) So happy you're liking it!! And I love squeals of joy! You rock. You're reading Shattered Silence then? Awesome! It was my first fic ever so it's great to hear you're loving it. :) Thank you for the delicious review!!! :D

Reviewer: Mosaicmaker Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2011 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 5

Pshh, no doubts were present, but it certainly is damn clear now ;)

So, how did dear ole Will become a vamp, I assume that's what he is, and does Eline become Drusilla? Hmmm, no perhaps not, I guess I'll just have to wait and see, but please don't make me wait too long? Pwetty pweeeeaaase?

Excellent chapter, Spike's hot, Buffy's awesome, and out of curiosity, how long do you think this fic is gonna be?

Mosaicmaker

Author's Response: Hee... of course you knew, smart lady. ;) But I liek to clear things up.

Or is he?! *g* Angelus didn't turn him, that's for sure. And Eline won't replace Dru as a character since Dru will make an appearance as well. Though perhaps in a different way that people might expect. I love your speculations! Hee... you'll have to wait and see indeed. ;) I promise more soon.

Hmm... a good question. I'm not entirely sure yet but it will be a longer one, about 30-40 chapters? That's just a rough estimate though. I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter as well and thank you for the delightful review!!! :D

Reviewer: claudia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2011 - 09:30 am Title: Chapter 5

Amazing. I can't wait to read more. Please post soon.

Author's Response: I promise more soon. Thank you for the lovely compliment, Claudia!!! :D

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2011 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 5

Poor William! Having to lose his family like that! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: He's 13 and he's got absolutely nobody now. It's going to be tough for him, I won't lie. More soon, promise. :) Thank you for being awesome!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2011 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 5

Mmmh Spike managed to have the last word at the encounter (if you don't count *pig*). :D
Regarding the dream - how cruel to make a little boy choose between two options (kill the mother or the sister). Angelus is a cruel bastard.
Made the sister a vampire? Or only killed her. But that would have shown mercy.
Spike seems to be human though.

Author's Response: Haha, he came on top, didn't he? ;) Buffy will ahve to try harder to battle Spike's retorts.
It was a choice nobody could have made without being devastated by the result. That kind of mind playing is something I thought Angelus would definitely do. My version of him does more than kill fish. ;)
A very good question! Death is mercy and we all know Angelus is anything but merciful.
He does, doesn't he? Another good observation. Thank you for the brilliant review!!! :D

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2011 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 5

A horrifying dream of Spike's origins via Buffy- wait until she and he connect the dots ..... can't wait!

Author's Response: Some things will be coming to the surface soon. ;) Hope you'll keep liking the story. Thank you for the yummy review!!! :D

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2011 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 5

Man, that was gut wrenching. Can't wait for more, though.

Author's Response: It was a very crucial moment in William's life. And the most devstating as well. Happy to hear you'd like to read more. :) Thank you for being awesome!!!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2011 - 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 5

So she is having William dreams..
Need to go back and reread but I don't think "William".. is now a vampire .. but a vampire hunter and Buffy maybe a slayer of sort he is going to get to help him kill Angelus and unfortunately his sister?
interesting twist..

Author's Response: Yup, she's dreaming his memories, pretty much.
Hee... I do like your conclusion about who William is and I have to say you just might be right. ;) About Buffy... she's not a Slayer, but she is a Potential. Thank you for the kind review!!! :)

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