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Reviewer: Puddinhead Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2012 - 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 8

I think your flashback bit in the previous chapter was SUPER clear, for the record. Clear like a glassless window. I hope you weren't disappointed that some people didn't get it because it was UBER clear! In my story "yours, william" it had, I thought, a clearly happy ending. He wanted to marry her. She chose to stay with him. And yet some readers commented "So sad that they aren't together in the end." So - what ya gonna do? --- Anyway, again, he's drawn very compellingly. To have the witch character pulling the reader in with questions is just really well done too :) Also, adore that she's a horny bitch

Author's Response: I'm very glad to hear that. :) And I guess you're right, what're you gonna do? There's always someone who is a bit confused or misunderstands your meaning. As a reader, I actually prefer things implied rather than being beaten over the head with it. One of the reasons I love your writing. ;) Horny bitch indeed! LOL!!!

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2011 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 8

Excellent, as always.

Author's Response: Oooh, thank you for those awesome words!!! :) I'm glad you're enjoying.

Reviewer: Les Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2011 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter 8

So great!

Author's Response: *beams* As are you! Thank you for the lovely review!!! :D

Reviewer: katamaphone Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2011 - 08:53 am Title: Chapter 8

That was too funny.....Whitchipoo is a pervert....with bad teeth and everything else to go with it! I laughed right out loud!.....................and yes......in all honesty, I probably would try to grope Spike ::))

Author's Response: Haha, she totally is! Mrs. Baum is a bit... ehm... lonely, you could say. And then that delicious piece of maleness comes walking to her front door. It was like presenting a juicy steak to a starving person! Hee... you would, huh? Minx. Thank you for being sweet!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2011 - 09:17 am Title: Chapter 8

Yes, yes I would try to grope Spike. And I think Buffy may want to, too. I love all the crazy mystery and the flashbacks, and the attitudes these two, poor hurt individuals keep showing. They are so far from knowing what is really going on, and so close to spilling something that may just help each other, it is brilliant to witness. She is probably remembering things because he's there to prompt it, and I want her to make him tell her. Two people so focused on avoiding each other wouldn't keep bumping into each other if they weren't meant to. Awesome, suspenseful, and I am ready for more! Update soon!

Author's Response: Haha, he does have that effect on people. The old lady could hardly resist trying. ;) And Buffy, well, she's too stubborn to admit she fancies him but hey, he hasn't helped with the way he acted. But maybe that makes her like him even more (and against ehr will). lol So awesome that you love the flashbacks! I have to admit I love writing them since each tells us a bit more about who Spike is and what he's been through. They could figure it out together if only Spike wasn't so determined to keep the supernatural aspect a secret. For the time being, they're stuck! Looks like the ante needs to be upped. ;) They'd love to play the avoidance game. Too bad they just keep bumping into one another. Ah, the small towns... gotta love them. Thank you so much for being amazing!!! :D I promise more will be up soon.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 8

Thank you for the Scar explanation.. I usually skim and go back for details..
At least Ms. Baum will give him the book when he deserves it .. without the personal gift to the witch..
Funny how she zapped him back to Buffy..
and you would think the "tingle" with the understanding of spells and demonics would have him questioning .. why this girl?
enjoyed..

Author's Response: Not a problem. :) It sucks having to wait days before reading more. If you read it all at once it would have been much clearer, IMO.

Haha... personal gift to witch! How diplomatic. ;)

Isn't it just? Such a lovely coincidence...

Spike will figure things out eventually, it will just take him some time since he can be rather thick-headed. lol Thank you for being lovely!!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 8

That makes sense now, so it was all at the same day. *nods*

This old witch knows more about Spike and his role. Wonder *checks* oh yeah, she was the one talking to Buffy. White eyes = prophet?
Interesting :)
As always, enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: Indeed! That's the hazard of having to wait for updates. If you read it all in a row it would have been much clearer. :)

She sure does know more than he does. An yes! It's the same woman that talked to buffy. It's awesome that you made that connection! Mrs. Baum is a witch and a bit of a seer as well.

Happy you think so. :D Thank you for the sweet review!!!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 8

So there is a lot more to this than Spike hunting down the vampire that killed his sister. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Revenge is the number one reason for living for Spike, that's for sure, but then again, we haven't seen all that Angelus has done (to him), have we? ;) Thank you for being awesome!!!

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 8

LOVE IT

Author's Response: LOVE YOU! That's a fact. :)

Reviewer: amayuscula Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 8

Please update soon.

Author's Response: Don't I always? ;) Thanks, gorgeous!!!

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