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Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2011 - 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loved this chapter! The interactions between the characters, brilliant! I so remember Miss Cleo! Whata hack! Looking forward to more

Author's Response: You're the sweetest! Thanks for the comment and for getting my Miss Cleo joke. I'm glad the interactions felt authentic. I'm trying not to make Angel a raging dick, but every time I write him he's sort of a raging dick. I like to think that's how he was on the show.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2011 - 06:20 am Title: Chapter 3

Kinda miss Miss Cleo, even though she was a fraud and a fake Jamaican. Love that she's all with the trusting of Spike, even if it is just for the time being. And that there is so something going on because of Angel's little display. Not sure about that, but ready for more! Update soon.

Author's Response: Oh, Miss Cleo! Glad someone got that reference. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: ragpants Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2011 - 01:55 am Title: Chapter 3

What an interesting--and original--twist on canon. I'm intrigued to see how you develop this!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad it wasn't a concept that you've seen a ton of.

Reviewer: claudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2011 - 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1

So they are now reluctant cohorts? Interesting. Love that you gave Xander a romance not predicated on pity and mutual self loathing.

Author's Response: I thought Xander deserved to have a decent love story for once. It all stemmed from the idea that maybe he had such bad luck with girls because the love of his life was turned into a vampire before he could meet her. In my version, he saves her. Buffy and Spike--ambivalent but drawn together.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2011 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 2

Loved the update! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2011 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow, I can just imange Spike. And is it halloween already.
You know on EF, on my my review you got what I was going for with me saying it yay you. This is pre-chip Spike here, yes he has done good but it was for his selfish reasons. So far he has done more evil than good. We have not seen him change yet, so I would love to see you take on how he does it. So yay.
Love how you worked in those little plot changes, i wonder how those stepping on butterflies will affect things later on.

Author's Response: THanks for the review! I hope you can already see subtle changes in the dynamic--for one thing, the Wish never happened. For another, Spike has been more cooperative with Buffy much longer. For another, she feels drawn to him in a deep way, which didn't exist in the series until much later. That gets explained in the next chapter.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2011 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 2

Great update! Love the use of a cameo character. When I read your end notes I remembered her, and also remembered the "Dude" guy Spike dusted. Looking forward to more

Author's Response: Glad you remembered! She's the girl in the purple sweater who asks if it makes her look fat, to which Sunday replies, you being fat makes you look fat. I wanted to give her a second lease on life.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2011 - 11:57 am Title: Chapter 2

Pity suck! I like the premise and the approach. And Xander.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked the pity suck.

Reviewer: Puddinhead Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2011 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Now you've gone and written this and now THIS is my favorite thing you've written. The scene post Dru-killage is just the best. My favorite bit is when he admits to disgusting himself sometimes, just before he pushes away from her.

Very nicely done Minx!

Author's Response: You are so sweet! thank you.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2011 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful 1 chap., love the back story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Colleen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2011 - 07:20 am Title: Chapter 1

I always love your stories. The way you write always makes me feel. Authors like you are why I still read...and will continue to after all the long years :)

Author's Response: Thank you! You seriously made my day!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2011 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Well, that really does put them in an interesting place. A truly interesting night for Buffy. And for Spike. And I wonder how much bonding really did happen. He picked her over Dru... Much more to come, I'm sure. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I tweaked the back story so it diverges from canon here. Spike was more of an ally in my story; he helped fight the mayor and showed up in "Band Candy," to save the babies. Also, "The Wish," never happened and Anya is still Anyanka.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2011 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to see where you go with this! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2011 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

You are my new fav author to read, I saw your name by this one and couldn't wait to read it!

Author's Response: That's an amazing compliment! You made my day!

Reviewer: rranne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2011 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Read this last nite and liked. Always love a bit of Dru. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Dru may be coming back in flashbacks, not certain yet.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2011 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really interesting start. Looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hope I can hold your interest throughout.

Reviewer: claudia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2011 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter 1

I am intrigued by where this might go. A sad wounded Spike without a chip? Can't wait for the next update

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: mooseshug Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2011 - 05:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, fascinating scenario! What a great idea for an AU. That was dramatic with a capital D. I loved the interwoven tragic story of Madeline too.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It seemed like something Drusilla would do. Glad you liked Madeline, that story has been kicking around my head for years in different permutations ever since I read Wilkie Collins' "Woman in White."

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