Reviews For My Elizabeth
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2012 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

Didn't expect this particular twist, but did recognize Warren's voice in the previous chapter, so kudos to you on his dialogue! Love the chapter 3 review satire that developed, too. Your readers are pretty smart, it seems. A good sign for a writer, dontcha think?

Author's Response: How nice to look on and see these reviews from you! Ah, the people that left the reviews as Colbert and friends really weren't me, mostly! I was only "Tractor." But the others had me laughing and I'm glad you thought it was funny too!

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh. Holy. Shit. Certainly did not expect this twist! I feel William won't have it easy after Buffy wakes up. :(

Brilliant job!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad it surpised you. I had to go with Warren to echo jonathan in the last book :)

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2011 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh, even worse than I thought - not the Mayor, Warren! yuck! I'm relatively certain that I DO NOT LIKE where this is going ... although I can't say that I haven't done similar things to my Spuffy couple before ... eeek! Evil muses ... Oh, poor William...

Author's Response: Since this tale is spinning off the last - it mirrors in Jonathan-Warren and some other ways as well. And happily, this time they're traveling! I got a little cabin fever in the last story.

Reviewer: Dr Stephen T Colbert Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2011 - 04:55 am Title: Chapter 3

This reminds of the time I helped Spiderman.

Author's Response: Since you're a doctor, could you look at this rash...?

Reviewer: PTWB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2011 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 3

Rupert, you serve us well. However, I fear the imagery invoked in your last comment may...distract certain readers from the point you are trying to make. We should not conjure up images of the one who stands in our way. They are weak willed and fall at the feet of such an Idol. Instead we should continue to bring them to their knees before our awesome power! You cannot resist! First there was Bieber, then when you thought you had survived that, we gave you Rebecca Black's Friday. Just when you thought we could do no worse, we unleashed Jedward upon you! Face it, we are unstoppable. Nothing in your arsenal can prepare you for what we have in store. Not even this "Spike" or "William" character! What you ask, can we do to stop him? Well, perhaps some glitter will be involved...

Author's Response: And here I was shocked (shocked I tell you!) that Mr. Mudock would be able to cause such a tingling in my nether regions. It was evoking the image of Spike and thrusting. Now I have THAT image to burn out of my minds eye the next time I see that crypt keeper on the news. THanks ever so!

Reviewer: Rupert Murdock Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2011 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 3

I'm sick of this story shoving your rigid liberal agenda down our throats. Your audience is tied down by the fast-paced story-telling and incredible prose, bound hand and foot really, but instead of just telling a story you have to thrust your agenda into our receptive, eager minds. You keep pistoning your ideals deeper and deeper until it makes me want to scream. Sure, it makes us curious and excited, but it's still wrong, so, so wrong. Did I mention that in this scenario the liberal agenda looks like punk Spike with the eyeliner and the ripped clothes from the subway scene in, "Fool for Love?" Well, it does. He also smells good.
You monster.

Author's Response: I think your puppet Bill O'Reilly would like to go to town on you with some falafel. Or was it a looofah?

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2011 - 06:34 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh, you ARE evil! Amazing how telling us exactly what is going to happen (probably) just makes me want to get there way faster. The only thing I can say, I think we are all underestimating William. There are a lot of bad things that happened in the time between William vamping and becoming Spike that clearly shaped him, but a simpering mama's boy would not have survived it. I want to see our boy William pull out his inner Spike and kick some PTWB ass! And even if Buffy doesn't remember, those two always had a thing, something in the air, unexplainable and terribly important. It may not wake up in bed with her wiped memory tomorrow, but it will be there. See me doing this amazing job of convincing myself it's not THAT bad. Looking forward to the telling! Update soon!

Author's Response: I adore this review because!!! You say things that make me want to respond in ways that tell you TOO much! BUt I won't! But I love the way you are thinking and in a really basic way you totally get where i am going (but I hope I take you there via a surprsing path). Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts!

Reviewer: Anony mouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2011 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter 3

LOL

Author's Response: Indeed!

Reviewer: Stephen Colbert Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2011 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

I am hereby putting tractors on notice.

Author's Response: This is what made me snort a g&t out of my nose. Thanks a lot. That stuff BURNS

Reviewer: Tractor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2011 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 3

I think the key thing that reviewers are missing is the blatant disrespect paid to tractors. The author snidely assumes that the sexy tractor song is unappealing, inferring that tractors themselves lack something when it comes to sensuality.

We have come a long, long way and like the first brave reviewer - we will no longer tolerate this kind of abuse from punk mouth kids.

Puddin, apologize for your debasing of farm equipment or wheat threashers at dawn. What say you?

Author's Response: Tractor, I am so very sorry (that I now live in an area of the US where hearing that song in the grocery store is a very real possibility)

Reviewer: Stephen Colbert Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2011 - 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 3

I've already called dibs on the threesome with Papa Bear O'Reilly. Everyone knows it's me, Papa Bear and a tub of Americone Dream.

Author's Response: TO quote Bill "We'll do it LIVE!" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5j2YDq6FkVE (Dance remix)

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2011 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter 3

If you're taking requests for television presenter three-ways, can I request Anderson Cooper?

Author's Response: Hell to the yes! I think we should hope in the scene too. *Straps on Jon Stewart mask* -- *Hands you Colbert mask* Action!

Author's Response: Hop in the scene. Not hope. Dammit. Ruined my own joke. AGAIN!

Reviewer: Rupert Murdock Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2011 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter 3

I agree with anonymous's brave comments defending Fox News. I'm none too pleased with your gentle ribbing, so be prepared to get your spuffy tapped and not in the good way. It's going to be the Nixoning of a lifetime.

Author's Response: First, you don't deserve to have the first name of "Rupert" and secondly (sad but true) somewhere in the world I have a niece with the actual first name of "Nixon." Her parents weren't big fans of...history or...knowing things :(

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow! What a twist! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks nut! I have the next one written and just need to get a little polish on! THanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Warren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 - 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love Fox News.

Author's Response: Why I oughta...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm the one who objected to your comment about Fox News. In my earlier message, you'll also notice I complimented your work. Look, it's your story and you can write whatever you want. Just don't see why you felt it necessary to make a smart aleck comment in response. You may not like what I wrote, but I was respectful.

Author's Response: Aw - where is your sense of fun? And, on a Spuffy forum, what could show more respect than promising sex with one of the objects of our affections? I ask you! I'd be willing to swap out Glenn Beck for Bill O'Reilly and we can switch pasta to 'wading pool full of green jello" but I have to draw the line at including Nancy Grace. Keep it classy, my motto.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 - 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

Like "Yours, William", this is an entertaining story, but I think this chapter could have benefitted from some tighter editing. I also didn't care much for the unnecessary cheap shot at Fox News.

Author's Response: If there was a cheap shot, it was at Kim Kardashian, who may be a media hound, but isn't evil. In your honor I will be writing a dream sequence in which Buffy has a freaky 3-way with Glenn Beck and a bowl of angel hair pasta - playing a game called "Noodle or Not?" Watch for it!

You must login (register) to review.