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Reviewer: Tennyoelf Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2013 - 04:52 am Title: Chapter 29

Ah, this is all heart breaking. But I really love where this is heading. Also love the "bloody hell" part. I love it when William takes control.

Author's Response: Thanks Tenny :)

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2012 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter 29

Hee... the author's note at the end was a lot of fun to read!

And you know, it's just like Buffy to go off running into trouble all on her own. I'm glad William was stubborn and jumped after her and that he was angry, because he has a right to be. The chapter was as always so well-written that it made you feel Buffy's inner turmoil. I'm looking forward to reading the next chappie whenever you're done writing it. :)

Author's Response: I finished it over the weekend and don't really like it at all :( But that's the way it is sometimes and I've learned to accept it. Some events are difficult to write about because of non-story issues - at least that the excuse I'm using today. Thanks again for the feedback

Reviewer: HostilePoet_17 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2012 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 29

:D I'm glad you enjoyed the nomination. "Yours, William" was such a beautiful story, and I thought it deserved it! :] ... I'm loving this by the way - you're a fantastic writer.

Author's Response: Thank you so much HP17 (is it ok if I call you that?) I am having such a wrestle with my current chapter that this encouraged me a lot. (hugs)

Reviewer: Inara Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2012 - 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 29

Okay... is it wrong that I think angry William is damn hot?! Something about angry-disapproval with an arched eyebrow over spectacles - super sexy.

Annnd... moving on. Great update. I can't wait for Buffy to kick some butt. While I love that she gets her normal life as a reward - come on, we all love Buffy's slayer-ness. Also, I think William will greatly enjoy kick-ass Buffy. I can't wait to see what these turn of events will bring. I hope that the PTB will step in at some point and make it so that while Buffy gets to keep her powers, she's not solely responsible to protect the world in the 1880s. Then there won't be all the guilt and slayer baggage to get in the way of Buffy/William happiness.

Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Hey Inara! I'm awfully glad you feel that way about a pissed off William. This next chapter is going to be very full of action and I've been having a bit of a time trying to find a foothold. Partly because of your noting that you liked a pissed off William, I've decided to write it from his POV. So thank you for that!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2012 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter 29

Well, there was a whole lotta wow. Hopefully William will get his explanation now. Gotta love him throwing himself off a train after her, though he really doesn't know what's going on. And he never really got a whole lotta scoop on her being a slayer the first time around, so I'm pretty sure that's not the kind of thing that would just come to mind. Love him getting angry, another William first. Hope they haven't bitten off more than they can chew! Update soon!

Reviewers Post Note to Billy-- Also, as far as references to you that are full of inconsistencies... "The Ballad of Billy the Kid" by Billy Joel. Also, apparently not very accurate. Just letting you know, you've got lots to work on till we see you again in chapter 31, 32 at the latest. :)

Author's Response: Ha! I'm going to youtube that as soon as I'm done here. It'll prolly just get me all pissed off. Maybe I should save it for when I want to write in Billy's POV. Ya know, like Spike, he was supposed to have a relatively small part in this tale, but every time he comes on the page, he kinda takes over. It's been an interesting process. Thanks for the feedback BR. It's so nice to know that you're reading and thinking about this :)

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2012 - 02:56 am Title: Chapter 29

OH Yay William! Good on ya!! Don't let her get away with that hooey of leaving you with no explanation - or even with one! Of course, it could get you killed... that would be bad. Try to not get killed or turned or beat up. OK, c'mon Buffy, time to buck up now - let him in - he deserves your trust and honesty.

I do feel badly for Buffy, and understand her wanting to let William stay happy, but she should know by now that secrets aren't the way. And thank you, Puddin' for letting Billy out of his box for a moment! Describing someone as Charlie Sheen's 'crazy brother' ... wow - low blow! :) Better watch your back, Billy! Emilio might be gunnin' for ya!

Author's Response: Thanks P4This next chapter is going to be a bit tricksy to write since I want to make it as close to the facts as I can (without making my readers want to curl up in the fetal position). I think the ride is about to turn bumpy, but at least the end of this very long tale is at last in sight! Thanks for the feedback, as always!

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