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Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2011 - 09:06 pm Title: I Fight Authority

This chapter was a much too violent for me. I know that Weatherby and Travers are sadistic but I am tired of Buffy and Spike being abused. I hope the next chapter will provide a glimmer of hope.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget. The violence was over the top, I agree ... there is a break in the next chapter from it as a little help arrives for Buffy, at least. I will say, if you can stick it out, the gory violence does not last that long, perhaps one more chapter or one and a half, then that will be past. Thanks for reading and stopping in! Hope is in their future ... hang in there! -p4s 2011.10.22

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2011 - 12:19 pm Title: I Fight Authority

Shouldn't Billy be having a dream and learning from Bess that their parents have been captured? Then when Travers presents his evidence they'll immediately know that he's responsible. I really hate for the child to be traumitized by another bad dream but I can't think of a faster, better way for the Scoobies to learn the truth of what has happened. Once again you're killing me in a good way with such a wonderful, heart wrenching story - more soon please!

Author's Response: Hi Melly ... Billy isn't coming into Bess' dreams every night now .... but hopefully he'll come soon! We'll cut back to Sunnydale shortly (I think after the next chapter) and see what's going on there. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in and thanks for the rec in the find a fic forum for angst! Yay! No better compliment! More soon! -p4s 2011.10.22

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2011 - 10:23 am Title: I Fight Authority

Are they really that stupid that they doesn't check Bess for the gem?

Anyway some heavy torture in this chapter, no surprice there. Hopefully Bess will be able to dream out some information. Saving them will be a big operation, Angel and his team could be of good use.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus ... well, they might've searched her for it ... like in her hands or in her clothes ... hmmmm ...

Yes, getting them out will be an epic battle ... who will wage it? We'll find out.

Thanks much for reading and always stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.10.22

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2011 - 08:22 am Title: I Fight Authority

The gem would be a good thing for Spike about now, both Buffy and Spike are being shredded to bits and it would be a good thing if somehow they could be rejuvenated and reborn into brand spanking new bodies like snakes shedding old skin. Your muse is really making them into grotesque looking and scarred martyrs. Bess especially, her life as a imprisoned vampire has pretty much eradicated her sense of self and innocence and turned her into a creature that thinks itself a possession to be used and abused. Even Darla who was a prostitute selling herself to survive her existence becoming diseased had more choices on her life and death than Bess ever did and look how sadistic she turned out to be. Will Bess ever overcome her experiences or will she be another casulty of the lack of protection her parents failed to provide? Your muse is painting a bloody canvas at the moment, whether the Scoob's ever show up or not, it will not alleviate any of the torments inflicted on the family of fallen hero's. Puts your muse in the blue room and strap's him on to a table.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2011 - 03:41 am Title: I Fight Authority

You do write some pretty gruesome stuff. I don't generally enjoy it when things get so rough but I think I keep reading in the hope that things will get better. So here is a guess-Bess picked up the ring and has, while unconscious and hopefully dreaming, contacted help and all will end well. But not for Travers and all the rest who I think should be locked up in a room with Kralik.. How is that for a nice ending?

Author's Response: Hi Sibb - I haven't written anything quite so gruesome before, but my muse insisted and if I try to tone it down too much, he just goes away ... If it's any consolation, it doesn't last too long and there will be some painful endings for certain people ... Thanks for hanging in there! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.10.22

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