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Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2011 - 02:15 am Title: Je t'aime

Seems to me that a child that "shall see the truth through a veil of lies" would be someone that Travers would be very afraid of considering the veil of evil lies he (and his family) have woven over the years. I do appreciate the respite from the violence and I really enjoyed the French lesson. More soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! Yeah, that's very true ... Travers should fear her! We'll find out exactly what that means as time goes on. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! The gorey violence is nearly over ... a couple or three more chapters. Hang in there! -p4s 2011.10.27

Reviewer: cj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2011 - 07:55 pm Title: Je t'aime

fabulous cant wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks, CJ! Will have more soon! Thanks for reading and stopping in! -p4s 2011.10.22

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2011 - 12:29 pm Title: Je t'aime

I love the banner. Now Giles is caught too but in the end information will get out. I wonder where Bess hid the gem since it can't be found? It almost makes me wonder if an outside force hid it. Some angst in this chapter too of course. Buffys thoughts about the people working there being monsters felt right. A decent person couldn't stand being there. He either leaves or turn himself into a monster.

Author's Response: Hi magnus! Hmmmm ... I wonder where that Gem is hidden! Did Bess hide it, or Spike? We'll find out in a bit. I think Travers must've hand picked the people he hired to work / know about the dungeon and what goes on there ... and it will be implied later that once you're in, it's kind of like a gang or the Mafia - you can't just leave. Will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! {hugs} -p4s

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2011 - 06:32 am Title: Je t'aime

Giles is now missing too with no one to know of where he headed before disappearing. The watchers being one step ahead of Spike and Buffy is curious, could it be that the dreams that Billy and Bess are sharing are induced by spells? How come Dani cannot participate in the dreams? If the dreams are something magically induced and can be spied upon, then their plan is up the creek without a paddle just like the plan that got them all captured. Travers plan now has to include Giles as being in a fatal accident. Buffy spent years killing vengeance demons, could it be that they have a hand on their current situation? Cause the torment they are going through certainly qualifies as vengeance. Buffy is missing memories of 5 years of her new life, could there be something in those missing years that could help her to connect as to who may be helping the watchers against them? Hope that this story will have Travers and his goons punished eternally, essentially turned and tortured like the vermin they really are.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! I'm not sure anyone knows why Dani doesn't participate in the dreams ... it would sort of be like being in your own dream. Buffy's theory was that Billy could feel Bess' pain and his subconcious sought her out (that ability of Billy's to feel other people's pain will be explored further later, too). I think that there isn't so much a big conspiracy as much as Travers becoming suspicious when B/S wanted a meeting to talk about Annie even though all the reports he was getting said there were no problems with Annie, so he started looking for the real reason for their visit and took the opportunity to set a trap. Or perhaps he always knew that Bess was B/S's daughter and had just been waiting for them to figure it out and find her. He seems to be putting a lot of value in prophecies (there is at least one more to come) and has illusions of granduer - wanting to make himself into a legand. I thiink he's just losing his mind! Yes, you're right, Travers' plan now has to include Giles - which will bring the whole thing to a head very shortly. Their friends are getting worried and will be putting pressure on the Council Head ... he's about to blow his top. We'll cut to SunnyD I think after the next chapter to see what's going on there. More to come soon! Thanks sooooo much for reading and your always insightful reviews! You should write stories! You have GREAT ideas!!! -p4s 2011.10.22

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