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Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2011 - 08:12 am Title: Iron Maiden

More torture, but now I know that Spike know where the gem is. Somehow they will get out of course, but how? By themself, their friends or some decent watcher who have found out about this? I can't say , I don't think they would be able to do that by themself and any other way could happen. Mayby if Spike was able to suddenly use the gem now that they are all together and do something, but I can't see how.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! Well, the next chapter is up and we'll see how they manage to exact some revenge and find a small sliver of hope that they can get out. Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.10.27

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2011 - 01:44 am Title: Iron Maiden

I really hope that you will get them out of this mess without Bess having to be tortured or Spike giving up the gem. I will be really upset if Travers wins another round.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget ... so, I don't think Travers has won another round ... maybe call the next one a tie? I think the sliver of hope will widen further soon. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in!! -p4s 2011.10.27

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 - 12:17 pm Title: Iron Maiden

This update has drained me of the energy required to write a review. Please revive me with an ass-kicking rescue by Faith and the rest of the gang!

Author's Response: Hi Melly! Well, that just makes my muse's day! Sorry!!! the kicking of Travers' ass will have to wait a little bit ... but have faith! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! {hugs} -p4s 2011.10.27

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 - 10:36 am Title: Iron Maiden

Hard chapter to read, pain, torment and despair all around. This story is playing out to be a glimpse into what is expected in hell. Hero’s and champions certainly do make sacrifices for the greater good, but they are the sacrifice in this story! Whether to expose the criminally insane man heading the watcher’s council or pay in blood the price for Bess’s freedom and the life of their unborn child. Bess has been through so much, I can only hope that she no longer thinks of herself as a victim dreading to believe that her ordeal would soon be over. Rupert can do magic and he is tied to Willow and Tara through blood, so will he unleash any magic to protect the others? Ripper is needed at the moment since he is the only one who is not shackled and not thought of as a threat by Travers and his goons. It is said that the greater the sacrifice, the greater the gain and at this point in your story, our little band of fallen heroes have more than paid their dues, especially Bess. I would love to see the pear of anguish used on Travers and Weatherby. I quote the following popular belief -The Universal Law of Karma: "Evil always comes back to the perpetrator of evil." If this is believed, then step by step Travers and his goons will have their evil misdeeds come back to them hard and strong. Your muse has shown what humans with souls are capable of in this story, proving that some monsters hide behind a cloak of respectability and do evil in the name of good.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! Ripper will make an appearance, for certain ... and Buffy and Spike always have to pay for everything with pain, don't they? Maybe one day I'll write a story where everyrhing comes easy ... LOL! Not bloody likely! I subscribe to that law of Karma, too ... so we can hope Weatherby and Travers get what they deserve, if not in this life, in the next! Unfortunately, history has shown that man can be cruel and heartless ... it's definately hard to tell the souled from the soulless at times.

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in - I LOVE your insightful reviews! I know, I say that all the time, but it's very true! More on the way! -p4s 2011.10.27

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