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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2011 - 09:38 am Title: Even the Losers (Get Lucky Sometimes)

That is some kind of hell they've been going through. Gotta hope we're headed in the right direction now. And I really think people forget how damn tough Buffy is. Rock on girl. Sure hope they make it. Update soon.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2011 - 02:38 pm Title: Even the Losers (Get Lucky Sometimes)

Travers is dead and the fight is on, good. I liked how you used some humor and the sweetnes between Buffy and Spike to make this chapter less dark. So Bess had the gem, but that means their captors where unbelievable stupid. The first thing to do should have been to stab the three vampires involved to see if any of them healed. Why didn't they do that with Bess?

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! Yes, it was unbelievably stupid of them to not stab her and see what happened ... instead the guards SEARCHED her for it ... and apparently didn't find it that way. You know, to be a guard working in a dungeon, you can't be the sharpest tool in the shed. Did the guards actually know what the gem did ... or just the Watchers/Travers? Were their orders to just 'find it' ... and not given any further information about what it was for/what it did? That sounds like something the council and Travers would do. We'll find out just exactly where it is and how Spike transferred it later... Thanks for reading and stopping in! If everyone did only the smart thing, then we wouldn't have much of a story ... :) {hugs} -p4s 2011.10.29

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2011 - 01:48 pm Title: Even the Losers (Get Lucky Sometimes)

Is it too much to ask that Travers spend the next ten thousand years in agony? Thanks for the quick update! More soon please!

Reviewer: CJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2011 - 01:34 pm Title: Even the Losers (Get Lucky Sometimes)

On the edge of seat waiting for what happens next. Cant wait to read how Bess will fit into the family .

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2011 - 06:07 am Title: Even the Losers (Get Lucky Sometimes)

Okay, someone better find the equivalent of the gem of amara for Buffy, seems that being pierced and not for jewelry is the theme for the escape for Buffy and Spike. At this point, I'd be happy if a rabid rat came to their rescue! Hope that Spike turned Travers so he can be a "guest" of the watcher's dungeon of despair and depravity. Why didn’t they just use Travers as a hostage to get out? I know he must be drained but the guards don’t know that and they could have just held him up with a knife to his throat to hide the bite marks. If any more harm comes to Buffy and Spike, I just might have to start humming the tune “I’m a little teapot” too! Let Buffy be alright in the next chapter, she has had her fair share of deaths notched on her belt. Starts humming….

Author's Response: Hi Vette! You know what, I thought about the Travers hostage thing later ... but I guess Buffy and Spike were just wanting to kick ass at this point, so they didn't. Giles, at least, should've ... Sorry - my evil muse just missed it. Well, hopefully there will be a rapid rat waiting in the wings to help them! Will have more soon ... Thanks for hanging in ... I think you can stop humming and tossing daggers at my muse soon, at least as far as the gore and physical violence goes ... No promises on angst, however. {hugs} -p4s 2011.10.29

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