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Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2011 - 03:48 pm Title: If I Were Brave

Love Clem as the babysitter and looking forward to Bess joining the family. More soon please and you're very welcome for the reccomendation - I'm always happy and willing to spread Spuffy goodness.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! got another chapter up - The start of trying to introduce Bess into the world. There will be lots of issues to deal with as we go forward ... rebuilding the Council, Bess and her soul, getting Bess home and what happens there and the newest little bit will be born in this story (eventually) ... Thanks again for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.11.08

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2011 - 10:45 am Title: If I Were Brave

The worst badnes is over, good, but Bess will have a hard time when she gets her soul so I hope they wait until things are calm before giving her that.

Now they need to find out how many watchers that new about the dungeon. It was a big secret so it can't be that many who new about it. I'm guessing Giles and Wesley will be working with that and how to run the council now. The prophecy will also have to be investigated. I'm a bit surpriced there were'nt any live Slayers in the dungeon. They must have tried to breed living Slayers with vampires since they had several and knew about Buffy and Spike. Well they could have been killed before we saw them.

Some economical compensation will be needed for Buffy and Spike so one problem will be gone at least.

And finaly, the part with Clem and the children, just wonderful.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! Yes, the worst physical pain is over, now comes how to help Bess transition into the world.

I don't think many Watchers knew ... just the handful that were there. They'll be working on figuring out what to do with the Council now... and yes, Giles, etal will have to work on the prophecy. I'm not sure if Travers would've tried to breed live Slayers with vamps ... he had a thing about that - he never liked Buffy with Spike. I think perhaps he looked at turned Slayers differently - as demons, so in his twisted logic, it was ok to use them for whatever he wanted. Of course, he was insane, so ... you never know!

Buffy and Spike will be added to the payroll, so yay for that!

Glad you liked Clem and the kids. I really like Clem, he's a sweetie!

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.11.08

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2011 - 06:14 am Title: If I Were Brave

Hands Spike a hankie while wiping my own eyes. Bess will need her parents help in transitioning into un-life out of the dungeon with a soul. Bess should be placed in a "half way house" of sorts to adjust at her own pace to being out in the world again. The council owes this family financially to make up for their ordeal so that they can return home without worrying about finances. Whoever takes over the council should set them up with a salary, if they can pay wacko's like Travers and Weatherby, they can pay Buffy and Spike. Always wondered where their money came from, protection money from the nations around the globe? Anyhow, what the heck happened to Kralik? Is he dust? Love the domestic scene with the kids and Clem, their worrying over their parents is over and how they will react to Bess will be interesting. Look forward to more to see where you take the story next.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! I always wondered where their money came from, too ... that will be looked into and B/S will be set up with a salary! Yay!

You are the only one that caught my oversight of Kralik! When Weatherby shut him up, I forgot he was there! LOL! Actually, I remembered at one point, but then forgot to fix it before I posted. I fudged it into the beginning of the next chapter ... sorry about that 'senior moment'.

Bess is definately going to need help with the transition ... hopefully Buffy and Spike and the other Bits and Scoobies are up to the task - we'll find out. We will explore that as well as what to do with the Council and eventually we'll even have the birth of the newest little bit. One of your suggestions won for the name. :) Thanks so much for reading and your keen eye! You keep me honest! Love your insightful reviews! -p4s 2011.11.08

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2011 - 11:35 pm Title: If I Were Brave

How has this story just start, I do not think I can take much more.
Poor Anya.

Author's Response: Hi gopher! Well, by demolishing the Council, they now have to do something to rebulid it and we also have to have the birth of the littlest bit ... and there are a few challenges with getting Bess integrated into the family ... Hope you will enjoy the upcoming drama ... the gore, however, is over. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in!! -p4s 2011.11.08

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2011 - 08:12 pm Title: If I Were Brave

Well, I have a few ideas about what should happen to the remaining doctors and guards. Are there any vampires left they can be fed to?

Author's Response: Hey Sibb! Heehee, yeah, they could probably scare up a vamp or two down there! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.11.08

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