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Reviewer: Catrine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2011 - 09:38 pm Title: Daughters

What a wonderful chapter. So great to see the connection that Bess and Buffy have, the way Buffy stepped up being the mum we know and love. I`m really looking forward to see their relationship develop and how the Summers family will welcome Bess, and the extended family as well. I feel so sorry for her.

Keep up the excellent storywriting, it`s like I`m watching the story instead of reading.

Author's Response: Hi Catrine! We will explore Bess and see how she does and how the others handle having another sister over the coming chapters. Glad you're enjoying the story!! Will have more soon! -p4s 2011.11.16

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2011 - 09:31 pm Title: Daughters

I was wondering why Spike could not get the gem from Bess so that he could heal. Now I know. It was nice to see the playful side of Buffy.
Look forward to reading more.t

Author's Response: Hi Bridget! Glad you're enjoying the story - will have more soon! Tehre are going to be some challenges for Bess to overcome which we'll deal with over the next chapters. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! -p4s 2011.11.16

Reviewer: MB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 - 04:54 pm Title: Daughters

Just catching up with the updates. First, let me say there is no need to thank me for the rec. I really liked seeing Buffy's slayer side and hope to see more of her in the future. I think her life would be easier if she could come to better terms with her. Looking forward to the next update, soon I hope.

Author's Response: Hi MB! So glad you're enjoying the story ... tyring to update a couple of times a week, RL permittting. We will be seeing quite a bit more of Bess over the coming chapters ... Thanks again for reading and stopping in and the fic rec, it's all very much appreciated! -p4s 2011.11.16

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 - 12:58 pm Title: Daughters

I really love how Spike wants Bess to enjoy having the Gem for awhile. Is there anyway for Willow to conjure or find another one? Thanks for another great udate! More soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Melly, There will definately be some work done to try and conjure another Gem. Glad you enjoyed the update! I will post more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! -p4s 2011.11.08

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 - 07:51 am Title: Daughters

Bess discovering the wonders of the modern world enjoying the simple pleasure of hot running water and a soft bed is a freedom denied to her for far too long. She really does need to go out in the sun and just be happy for a change. Any chance of making another gem for Spike to wear? I’m sure that Willow and Tara are up to the task of mojo’ing an invincible stone or just plucking the ring from the other dimension where Spike shanshued into a human being. That Spike doesn’t need it anymore and for all their suffering, one of the witches should be able to send Faith to procure the ring for Spike. The watchers council headquarters could be re-located to California and let Wes run the London branch. The demon in Buffy showing itself may be a result of the scythe and the unborn child also got a dose of the magic from the weapon. Hands Buffy a candy bar for her sweet-tooth craving, does she ever crave anything weird while pregnant? Enough to gross out Spike who eats wheat-a-bix and burba weed in his blood. Look forward to the see where you take the story next.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! Willow will work on finding out how to conjure another Gem. Since the two other dimensions that they are familiar with stemmed from the post NFA, or the post-Chosen 'evil Joss Universe' ... the Gem was destroyed by Angel long ago. I believe you know my muse well enough to know that he's not just gonna drop another Gem in their lap ... {{cue evil laugh track}} Poor Spike and Buffy ... {{cuddles them}}

Glad you enjoyed the update and Bess' reaction to simple pleasures. As far as relocating ... I do think someone will propose that very soon. Giles will be aghast! heehee! I'll have to check on some strange cravings for her that may even squick Spike ... great idea that I hadn't thought of! :) My muse just keeps going and going with this story, I really hope his prattling doesn't turn boring with no blood and guts to spice it up. Will have more soon! {hugs} -p4s 2011.11.08

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 - 06:44 am Title: Daughters

Good work on Bess reaction to this new situation. The pictures used felt right, they showed their emotions in a good way.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! I'm glad you enjoyed Bess' reaction to the wonderous new world she's been thrust into. She's very much caught between being a child and a woman and that will prove to be a challenge for her and her parents. Add to that the insecurities her past has heaped on her and there is going to be a healthy struggle for her and her parents in the coming months. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Will have more soon! -p4s 2011.11.08

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