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Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2011 - 02:34 pm Title: Yummy, Yummy, Yummy

Great idea to move the Watcher's Council. With such a loving family I think Bess will be able to adapt to living in the world. Thanks for another great update. More soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! I'm glad you like the idea of moving the Council closer to the action! We'll find out how well Bess can adapt to life on the outside and also how she'll do with an instant family after being alone for so long. Thanks much - got another chapter up for you! -p4s 2011.11.16

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Date: 11/14/2011 - 09:39 am Title: Yummy, Yummy, Yummy

I guessed that Bess had her soul but I didn't thought about it being the reason the dreams started. It seems like the story about Connor is spreading.

They are trying to organize the new Council, good. They also has to organize the offices around the world in a good way. It does seem a bit early to place Bess a position like that, she should learn to live first.

I would prefer if the headquater stayed in London. London seems like the better place to have it in. I also like when things have a long history in a place, and such a change just seem wrong to me.

I do get their point but I don't have to like it.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! I would think keeping a supernatural child born to two vamps a secret would be hard with interdimensional demons spreading the word. It may be a little early to put Bess in a position of authority, but I think she'll have some perspectives they may not have thought about and I know Spike and Buffy will support her and make her feel like her contribution matters. It maybe also help her self-esteem for her opinions to be valued. Sorry you don't like the Council moving. I was originally gonna leave it and send Wes there to take over, but after thinking about what the characters would really do, esp. the Slayer contingent, I thought they would opt to move. It also solves a dilemma for Giles, even though he's not really happy about it, he wants to be involved with the reconstruction, but also with Edmond, so this helps him do both. Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! More to come! -p4s 2011.11.16

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2011 - 09:25 am Title: Yummy, Yummy, Yummy

Love how the re-organization is being hashed out – a “round table” structure of sorts to have checks and balances between watchers and slayers. Going high tech would also be good, the initiative type of weaponry and communication devices should start being put into play or even research and design done to create wooden bullets for guns, holy water grenades for example to use when facing large amounts of vampires. The scythe is one weapon that slayers seem to enjoy using, could that be duplicated by the wiccans? Are they going to invite witches into their organization? When you think about it, the watchers council which really should be re-named as “The Council” is the equivalent of Wolfram and Hart and both sides use magic. The vampires that interrupted the Weckerly’s chocolate session really deserved to be dusted. EVIL! Sounds like Buffy and Spike are now staff members and should not have to worry about where their next dollar comes from. Slips your muse a list of things to eat for Buffy and Bess, order pizza please! Only Buffy may want to have one made just for her with her pregnant cravings. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi Vette! First, let me say, love the Pizza idea - I will try to slide that in the story somewhere with some squicky preggers pizza for Buffy! :) (do you have any requests? Hawaiian pizza with anchovies, peanut butter, pickles and chocolate sprinkles maybe?) I think it makes more sense for 'The Council' to be more like a back-office support staff for the Slayers - kinda like MI6/ Q Branch for Bond ... and I'd say they'd keep their relationship with the Coven in Canada, and draw on Willow and Tara, as well. Your ideas for the weapons are great and would fit in with that idea of the support group coming up with different things for them to use to battle evil, as well as getting all the demons classified and books scanned and searchable online, etc. It may take a while to get all that set up, but that's where I'm heading .. I hope. My muse does have a habit of doing about-faces on me without notice! LOL! We can hope it doesn't turn into GET SMART rather than BOND! LOL! Anyone interrupting an Ice Cream session deserves to be dusted! heehee! Thanks so much for the wonderful ideas and indepth reviews! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.11.16

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2011 - 10:19 pm Title: Yummy, Yummy, Yummy

Good chapter. Finally some money for the Weckerly household. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks again, Bridget! Got more up for ya! Yay for money!! -p4s 2011.11.16

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