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Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2011 - 07:24 am Title: Standing Outside the Fire

A sad feeling in the beginning, losing all that history and move it to California. I will try to stop feeling bad about it :-)

Travers is gone, good but the prophecy seems bad. It reminds me of what she already did when she had to change the reality.

I liked the talk between Buffy and Faith and it was good that Bess got to have a good time.

Author's Response: Hi magnus! I know you don't like the idea of moving ... I really think it will help the Slayers to have them closer - and I know it'll help Giles keep both his calling and his family close at hand. Giles will do more research on the prophecies and more about them will be revealed over time; those will play out over a long while - it will be many years before fruition (I think, unless my muse changes his mind, which he's been known to do). Thanks so much for always stopping in! -p4s 2011.11.22

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2011 - 07:20 pm Title: Standing Outside the Fire

Thanks for such a wonderful chapter! Although you do have me worried about the prophecies that Travers mentioned. More soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! Giles will do more research on the prophecies and more about them will be revealed over time; those will play out over a long while - it will be many years before fruition (I think, unless my muse changes his mind, which he's been known to do). So, don't fret over them too much just now. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! -p4s 2011.11.22

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2011 - 07:14 pm Title: Standing Outside the Fire

Qunetin's death after re-birth was too swift and painless, can only hope that the hell he finds himself in is akin to the dungeons he put Bess in and that he has to suffer what she had to daily. The whole re-location and qulification sounds exhaustig so the side trip to the pool was really what Bess, Spike and Buffy needed to bond and let their lost child blossom again into the young girl she thought dead within. A new sister for Anne and Dani that they can show the new world to sounds like fun, hope that they can disintegrate any awkward or impending fears with Bess immediately. Bess had a sister and brother growing up, hope that she can just open up her last emotional barrier to enjoy her second chance which was long past overdue. Glad that the gore is over with for now but knowing your muse, don't get too comfy!

Author's Response: Hi Vette! Yeah, I wish someone could've tortured Quentin, but ... my muse couldn't decide who should kill him, Spike or Giles ... so this way they both get to. I'm really happy with how well the Weckerly kids welcome Bess ... it will be coming up in the next couple of chapters; Bess still has a long way to go tho and love is something that will be elusive and frightening for her. Yes, moving the Council will be pretty much a nightmare ... and it gets more nightmarish by the day for Giles. I can promise that the heavy gore is over ... the angst, however, is not. {{cue evil laugh track}} Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! You always take so much time on your reviews - you don't know how much they are appreciated! -p4s 2011.11.22

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