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Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2011 - 07:29 pm Title: Wonderful

The money trouble really puts a strain on the family. Not being able to support your family is a huge crash on your feeling of selfworth. I hope Spike realizes that sometimes you have to take the help that is offered and that the children wont blame themself. Anyway it was nice how their friends where helping and as always wonderful use of pictures to set the mood. I agree with Xander Miranda Kerr (good picture) has nice eyes, but I love her hair. I have a thing for long hair on a woman.

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! Money troubles can definately rip people apart and I can see Spike feeling really unhappy with himself for not being able to support them in the way he thinks they should be supported. He puts too much pressure on himself for this, which Buffy is getting ready to tell him soon. Hopefully he'll get it and not take it as a shot to his manhood.Glad you liked the pictures and like Miranda ... heehee! I'll try to keep long hair in mind for you ... Spike likes long hair too, so that shouldn't be a problem! :P Thanks much! Always love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.12.14

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2011 - 07:56 am Title: Wonderful

There really must be an apocalyptic prophecy at work if Faith is going celibate. Spike losing his temper over Buffy applying and getting welfare really is unreasonable, they pay taxes, time to get back. The friends getting together to help clean up the mess is truly worth more than gold itself. You really cannot buy the kind of love and friendship they have. The children becoming aware of the strain that money is having in their home life must be frightening and confusing. Myself growing up, I used to do babysitting and have yard sales to get money, my brothers had a paper route, did yard work, washed cars, walked pets and/or fed them for neighbors, and we even had a lemonade/bottled water stand which we sold for double the money during hot days. Our elderly neighbors would have us help them unload groceries and put them up, help do some light cleanup around their home, it was a mutual relationship for both of us, they got company to check in on them to make sure they were alright and get help with being independent in their home and the kids got to earn money and learn respect and compassion for the elderly. Win…win situation. We used to love hearing their childhood and life stories and it fueled our imagination for playing later on. We never felt poor, only proud that we could be independent and the money we earned did not get spent frivolously. During the rainy season, we would earn money by pushing cars out of low areas in the road where they stalled. People would only be glad to pay a bunch of kids to push their car out of the water so they could stay inside the car and dry. (Fond memory). During the holidays, us kids would bake (under adult supervision) peanut butter cookies and brownies and sell them around our neighborhood. It was surprising just how much some of our elderly neighbors looked forward to buying them. Never did we ever feel like we wanted to “keep up with the Jone’s” on the latest toys or gadgets, that was not what made us happy. Building a tree house, putting on a play at home for our parents sharing our limited time together is what we looked forward to. Now Spike may hate the idea that his kids would want to earn their own money, look at how Bess made hers. But, their family breaking up over finances would be a worse bitter pill to swallow than his wounded pride. BUT! Knowing your evil muse, he would have the IRS want the kids to declare any income they made! He’s EVIL!

Author's Response: LOL!! re: the Faith celibacy thing - Willow says the same thing in a later chapter! That's too funny! I love the story of pushing the cars out of the water ... that's free enterprise at work! I'd pay for that! When I was a kid, my father owned a storage/warehouse thing and there were several people in there with businesses (there was the cement man and the pool man and the cabinet man and the a/c man and the screenman and the hat man ... I didn't know any of their actual names ... LOL! ) I earned money working for them off and on, doing whatever - sweeping the floor or washing stuff or whatever they could find for me to do until I got a 'real job' at the age of 14 ... My dad invented 'thrifty' ... look it up in the dictionary and you'll see his photo! ;) We didn't do plays, we did CONCERTS ... bring the record player outside in the yard and we'd stand up on a big wooden spool (a cable spool), that was our stage, and we'd sing along with the records... the whole neighborhood would come to our concerts ... LOL! My muse is evil, he does love to toture them and us ... but you know, in the end, he loves them and they'll only be stronger for the torture ... or dead. One or the other... :P {{hugs}} -p4s 2011.12.14

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2011 - 10:43 pm Title: Wonderful

Don't you think they have suffered enough. I don't know what is worse the actual tortue or the money problems. I will choose the money problems. They seem to come together when they are tortured but money can and will tear families apart. Please let there be a solution. I swear your muse is diabolical. Great writing.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget! Well, apparently my muse doesn't think he's tortured them sufficiently ... Spike has some ideas - Buffy won't like them. We'll see what happens! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! We'll have some lighter chapters soon, despite the money issues still hanging over their heads for a while longer ... then back to the angst. Thanks so much for stopping in! -p4s 2011.12.14

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2011 - 08:52 pm Title: Wonderful

Why did I stop reading this, sometimes I am so silly.
Poor Buffy and Spike. I can see both of their points, but I have to agree with Buffy. If they have one less bill (and food has to be a big one) maybe they have a better shot of catching or at least stop falling.

Author's Response: Hi gopher101! I don't know ... sometimes I think my muse's penchant for angst gets the best of some people - he does like to torture our heroes ... Glad you'e back! I have to agree with Buffy, too - Spike's trying to be all things to everyone and it's just too much ... which Buffy is getting ready to point out to him very soon. Thanks so much for coming back! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.12.14

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2011 - 06:46 pm Title: Wonderful

I've decided since your muse obviously doesn't have a soul I'm going to ask Willow to curse him with one. I think the poofy wanker should give back some of the money he took, don't you? Thanks for the update. More soon please.

Author's Response: LOL! Hi Melly! You could be right about the soul thing ... or he just likes to make me cry, one or the other (or both!). Better make sure the 'happiness clause' is off the curse, otherwise our Spuffy couple may never get to make up! Thanks so much for stopping in! Love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.12.14

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