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Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2011 - 06:48 am Title: If You've Got the Money, Honey

Gets cash out of emergency cookie jar to pay Spike to strip-tease in a G-string. *Eyes glaze over*. Billy is sensitive for a reason, love the hint that perhaps his talent lies in matters of the heart. Annie growing up going to dances and kissing boys while Spike goes "radical" in keeping an eye on her is hilarious! The sixties slang is great but if Annie ever says phrases such as “shake that thing” or "sock it to me" Spike will see psychedelic star’s in front of his eyes and flip out. The financial apocalypse is still looming over them, thank goodness for Ebay!

Author's Response: Heehee! Oh, to have Spike shake his booty ... and other parts, for us in a gstring and coconut oil! Glazed eyes all around! Glad you enjoyed Spike's foray into stealthy voyerism with Annie ... that poor girl. Oh yeah, let's hope she knows what sayings to stear clear of around her over protective Papa... :P They are still working on digging out of the financial crunch ... or at least staying afloat. Spike has some ideas ... watch out! Thanks so much for the review! Always love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.12.25

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2011 - 12:40 am Title: If You've Got the Money, Honey

Poor Billy, no teacher should ever do that. It was wonderful how Spike get what Billy ment with his drawing. The school dance part was nice to. Lovely happy picture of Buffy, the smile and the hair, good. Stripping would be one way to bring in more money. Well Buffy and Spike are both to possesive to allow that. But if things turns desperate. I bet a Slayer could do a very good show. Mayby a Buffy and Faith double strip, a nice thought before I go to sleep :-)

Author's Response: Hi Magnus! I keep looking for good pictures of Buffy to use (or SMG during those years). I have some sexy ones but she's dressed strangely in some, so I'll have to try and figure out how to set that up - maybe in a dream or something like that 'cos some are just not things Buffy would wear. I liked that one of her smiling nicely too. The thing that happened to Billy with the drawing is a true story from real life ... and you're right, no teacher should ever do that! Yeah, I bet Buffy and/or Faith could put a whole new spin on a pole dance! LOL! Very sure Spike would object unless the strip was for him alone ... then I don't think he'd mind being double-teamed. :O Sweet dreams! (PS: There's another chapter up, just want to make sure you didn't miss seeing it.) Thanks so much!! -p4s 2011.12.23

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2011 - 02:48 am Title: If You've Got the Money, Honey

Love ferocious Mom Buffy ready to jump in to defend her kids honor. Poor Billy. Perhaps they should start putting his works up on ebay. That actually may help to get him over it. And such an interesting insight about him as the Heart. An empath... perhaps his art has a bit to do with reading auras. Would certainly explain the colorful swirls. And Spike as a stripper for the night, that I would love to see. A great way to leave us for the holidays. Hope Bess lets Billy say hey, girl needs a friend. And I want to know about the rat monsters. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hey BuffyRat! The aura thing is a great thought ... one which I hadn't acutally considered, but perhaps my muse had. He has a habit of coming back to things later and saying ... see, there was some point to that, after all! LOL! Oh yes ... how I would love to have the vid of Spike the stripper! Could make a million ... hey - maybe there's something they could sell on ebay! heehee! You will definately find out about Bess and the giant rats ... not next chapter but the one after, promise! Thanks so much! Always love hearing from you! -p4s 2011.12.22

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2011 - 06:16 pm Title: If You've Got the Money, Honey

Loved the update.

Author's Response: Thanks, gopher101! I'm glad you liked it! Will try to have more very soon ... maybe tomorrow and we'll check in with Bess. Thanks again!! Happy holidays! -p4s 2011.12.22

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